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    Default Epic battle: SBU vs Quickill

    Since our last thread got shut down, let's finish this...

    Since I started, how bout SBU goes, I go, then SBU finishes.

    Y'all be the judge. Two of the most epic All TL rappers goin head to head.


    ROUND 1____

    Quickill:~~~~

    Oh **** my arch nemesis
    Evacuate the premises
    Blow his tank to smithereens til there ain't nothin' left to diss
    Pack guns like sardines, you're de-parting
    I ****ed your girl's innards, broken heart-ing
    What's my game? I'm sicker than sharting

    Pause...
    Flow sick need gauze, rhymes rubbed raw
    Terror like Jaws, cue round of applause
    **** your wordplay, nothin' short of heresay, and her say that my flow's sicker
    Plus my ****'s thicker, you're like weak Flipper, ***** I am a shark
    You're nothin' nevermind, I've the mind of a God
    Spit pure blasphamey, your lyrics aren't a trap to me
    Ain't even attractin' me, rhyme with no substance
    Like coke cut with bakin powder you ain't holdin' nothing
    Fronting, punching - you dodge a lil' too late
    Prepare to hate - wait
    Just start my day as I throw you away
    Got a maid made for me, tell her burn the trash to blaze
    Drug you out in a body bag - damn that was my last body bag - what a ****in' waste
    Burn you like mace, faceless disgrace, brains and guts - all over the place
    I rock to my own beat, ***** I run the whole street
    Bout to run the whole town, you barely hang around
    Ask me what's up ***** I'mma shut it down
    Plus I rep the underground, plus I got the freshest sound
    Heard some fag say SBU nothin' but a reach around
    Haaa..

    ...
    ...

    Burn like ether
    My girl kinky like leather
    Your girlfriend fat
    Call her a heifer
    **** her? never
    Leave her for the bums
    You're game is stagnant, my world is spun
    I'd ****in kill you but torture is too fun
    Next time you diss the homie West G
    ***** you better run
    Pray to god you got a gun
    BLAT

    --

    SBU: ~~~~

    nice setups. not got proper lines yet bruv?
    you weave it like a seamstress on this thread but only lies get "spun".
    this is goin' to the best man like when brides get drunk.
    plus.. "Nemesis" is backward; you 'sise-meN' up

    fast bars. you're not even worth my time.
    you "Dodge" like a 'Viper' but I earned my stripes.
    to the 'Core-..vet'; I'm "Quick" and classic.
    you're only "Ill" if simple language is symptomatic.
    either you're stupid or losing through lethargy.
    I'll kick your 'a'** out it; "heresay" is heresy.
    "nothing left"? you're not right.
    I'm centre stage.. where you'd be burnt by the spotlight.
    you're stuck on "pause" whilst I'm getting replays.
    please leave. take the pain as a keepsake.
    done failing? then run bailing.
    "flipper"'s filler, you're just 'wailing'.
    and if that's 'A-hab'it you're refusing to 'waive'..
    your best friends'll sleep through your funeral-wake.





    ROUND 2 ______

    Quickill: ~~~~

    Phony mother****er all you got is word play
    Not real like me you too fake like April fool's day
    I don't smoke weed but I'm high up where the birds be(y)
    You don't put in work and you ain't never flip yay
    You ain't never hustled, week like you a Thursday
    Rhymin with some syllables but glorly undesrve-ing
    I wanted it so bad so I got in the worst way
    Runnin through my veins it's insane like the king say
    Crown is on point you get smoked like a joint
    And Quick never stops never folds, they annoint
    Me, til - the - end - see, you - just - empty, no friendly stop pretending
    Not on my level now or till the end B

    Huh...

    Look..

    From a trailer to a condo posted in the east
    On the beach with bad *****es swimmin in the sea
    Now I run the town but I used to run the streets
    If you said you paid your dues you'd be lyin through your teeth
    Who you lyin to is me, just admit that you weak
    ***** put the rhythm down you can't appreciate the beat
    Cuz I'm always in the zone under pressure or when free
    You the blind leadin blind, vision nothin you can't see
    Next time you wanna fight bring your best ***** I'm beast

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    I draw the line and you "fold" straight away.
    it's never fly when you fold.. paper 'plain'.
    you "run the streets" like rats do. bad move. relax dude.
    you "run the streets" like the gutter that attracts you.
    you're light like your grams are bagged. your grammar's bad; you're not drunk but 'D'rank'.
    so deep I can see bass. cease hate, youre 'deep' fam; you'll sleep with the seabass.
    this writer's weak. he pirates beats; 'snared'rum'.
    put wax on 'paws' and scratch like a bear does;
    call me "B" 'til I leave with your honey. don't even act like the punchlines stung me.
    I beat you deaf, dumb and "blind"; ..one unwise monkey.
    I lead like seeing eye dogs. your vision failed,
    your lines guide the 'site less'.. like it was braille.

    bruv, you're muddled up.. I'm "not on your level"- I'm more than one above.
    your suckerpunch just sucked.. if this rapper's "high" it's thanks to my uppercuts.
    I've cleverer rhymes, relevant lines and nevermind the wordplay..
    it's the passion for rapping which smashed it in the first place.
    you dissed dope wordplay, rhyme and deep content..
    take all of those out of a drop and whats left?
    you're not fresh but I'm not vexed, we're not friends.
    you're 'Quick' 'Ill'? nah, but should've been cot-death.
    Last edited by _SBU; 04-02-2012 at 01:00 PM.

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    ROUND 3


    his "collabo mixtape" failed.. and it might seem harsh;
    when he swears and gets censored is the only time he sees 'stars'.
    I moderate the forum.
    you're moderate- it's boredom.
    his wit's pathetic, it's fits the ethics.
    I'm writing rhymes here, he's interjecting.
    it isn't intercepting. I leave you conquered and even you concur..
    you'll 'Be-52' and still not've dropped a 'bomb' verse.

    but I've seen his old song lyrics.. got with it, the tracks are dope.
    man's relaxed the standard though, and can't flip into battlemode.
    'nuff respect. but I ain't about to suffer threats if I aint got much love for them.
    ..born then christened "Quick..Kill!" as first thing that his mother said.

    My lines like drivebys; they've done 'Quick-Kill's;
    I've 'big fans' with 'Van's.. like dutch wind-mills.
    you aint that quick just coz you shout hoarse.
    doubt that downpour and I'm down for round four.

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    Me relax the standards never
    Always make it rain even in the sunny weather
    Whether you see it or not homie I never have been better
    And my girl is soakin juicy but for me she makes it wetter
    Haaaa-------

    ***** let's get started
    More ******* gun play than the movie Departed
    Rap game stupid flow go so ********
    And I never drop my defense like the Giants in the fall *****
    **** the UK, US bang all day
    Plus our girls way flyer in every single way
    Diss you till I leave you speechless like you don't know what to say
    ******* nerd moderater all you moderate is gay
    Forums ha - nah stop the immaturity
    You comin' at me weakly like you got some insecurity
    I **** your girl weekly she pay me oral grat-tituity
    Raps seem convoluted like you're lackin with the purity
    And when I'm done with you yeah you'll prolly need some therapy
    Ancient airplanes ******** ain't scarin me
    Nothin short of nonsense constant disparaging
    You want round 4, be my guest son sing it
    I'm just warmin up now save my best ***** bring it

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    Ah man they censored like 80% of my rap...

    line "flow go so -mentally handicapped-"
    line "Giants in the fall -female dog-"
    line "ancient airplanes "bullcrap"
    should make more sense knowing that..

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    Quote Originally Posted by quickill View Post
    Ah man they censored like 80% of my rap...
    post clean content rather than stuff which has to be censored.
    welcome to go more rounds on the battle thread..
    http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/ra...e-posting.html

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    Yeah I'll just have to stop cussing in my raps here I guess. Eeeeeh alright.

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    ^^^ two most epic writes on atl.. Hmm

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    Quote Originally Posted by quickill View Post
    Since our last thread got shut down, let's finish this...

    Since I started, how bout SBU goes, I go, then SBU finishes.

    Y'all be the judge. Two of the most epic All TL rappers goin head to head.


    ROUND 1____

    Quickill:~~~~

    Oh **** my arch nemesis
    Evacuate the premises
    Blow his tank to smithereens til there ain't nothin' left to diss
    Pack guns like sardines, you're de-parting
    I ****ed your girl's innards, broken heart-ing
    What's my game? I'm sicker than sharting

    Pause...
    Flow sick need gauze, rhymes rubbed raw
    Terror like Jaws, cue round of applause
    **** your wordplay, nothin' short of heresay, and her say that my flow's sicker
    Plus my ****'s thicker, you're like weak Flipper, ***** I am a shark
    You're nothin' nevermind, I've the mind of a God
    Spit pure blasphamey, your lyrics aren't a trap to me
    Ain't even attractin' me, rhyme with no substance
    Like coke cut with bakin powder you ain't holdin' nothing
    Fronting, punching - you dodge a lil' too late
    Prepare to hate - wait
    Just start my day as I throw you away
    Got a maid made for me, tell her burn the trash to blaze
    Drug you out in a body bag - damn that was my last body bag - what a ****in' waste
    Burn you like mace, faceless disgrace, brains and guts - all over the place
    I rock to my own beat, ***** I run the whole street
    Bout to run the whole town, you barely hang around
    Ask me what's up ***** I'mma shut it down
    Plus I rep the underground, plus I got the freshest sound
    Heard some fag say SBU nothin' but a reach around
    Haaa..

    ...
    ...

    Burn like ether
    My girl kinky like leather
    Your girlfriend fat
    Call her a heifer
    **** her? never
    Leave her for the bums
    You're game is stagnant, my world is spun
    I'd ****in kill you but torture is too fun
    Next time you diss the homie West G
    ***** you better run
    Pray to god you got a gun
    BLAT

    --

    SBU: ~~~~

    nice setups. not got proper lines yet bruv?
    you weave it like a seamstress on this thread but only lies get "spun".
    this is goin' to the best man like when brides get drunk.
    plus.. "Nemesis" is backward; you 'sise-meN' up

    fast bars. you're not even worth my time.
    you "Dodge" like a 'Viper' but I earned my stripes.
    to the 'Core-..vet'; I'm "Quick" and classic.
    you're only "Ill" if simple language is symptomatic.
    either you're stupid or losing through lethargy.
    I'll kick your 'a'** out it; "heresay" is heresy.
    "nothing left"? you're not right.
    I'm centre stage.. where you'd be burnt by the spotlight.
    you're stuck on "pause" whilst I'm getting replays.
    please leave. take the pain as a keepsake.
    done failing? then run bailing.
    "flipper"'s filler, you're just 'wailing'.
    and if that's 'A-hab'it you're refusing to 'waive'..
    your best friends'll sleep through your funeral-wake.





    ROUND 2 ______

    Quickill: ~~~~

    Phony mother****er all you got is word play
    Not real like me you too fake like April fool's day
    I don't smoke weed but I'm high up where the birds be(y)
    You don't put in work and you ain't never flip yay
    You ain't never hustled, week like you a Thursday
    Rhymin with some syllables but glorly undesrve-ing
    I wanted it so bad so I got in the worst way
    Runnin through my veins it's insane like the king say
    Crown is on point you get smoked like a joint
    And Quick never stops never folds, they annoint
    Me, til - the - end - see, you - just - empty, no friendly stop pretending
    Not on my level now or till the end B

    Huh...

    Look..

    From a trailer to a condo posted in the east
    On the beach with bad *****es swimmin in the sea
    Now I run the town but I used to run the streets
    If you said you paid your dues you'd be lyin through your teeth
    Who you lyin to is me, just admit that you weak
    ***** put the rhythm down you can't appreciate the beat
    Cuz I'm always in the zone under pressure or when free
    You the blind leadin blind, vision nothin you can't see
    Next time you wanna fight bring your best ***** I'm beast
    And quickill 'ether' is pronounced ee-thur like eager. Not eth-er like leather.
    Thesauruses can be good sometimes but not always

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