Recipe Instrumental

I dont think you understand, the heart it takes
trynna make it, go all the way
so far its been all mistakes
our lives take part in a place,
with no fairy tales,
almost every bail, wasnt even useful
the colors you match can be crucial, people just trigger pull
no yellin or foolish signs being thrown up
families trynna disown us
protective people always deciding for us
solutions to illusions get clearer, as i get closer
wise as a young'n, imagine as i get older
mind contains so many thoughts kept to me
i want someone to invest in me, as we search for destinies
do what i do best, and let the rest just be

Not bad man not bad

yeah good stuff. some interesting content and style. I think it gets better technically as it goes on. ie. internal rhymes and syllable placement.

The only thing I'd really suggest there is using an even number of lines, especially if it's to be performed over a beat. usually works best if it's an even number within each transition of the rhyme scheme.. so one more line to rhyme with the last three in your piece.