Terror Inside

It's been a while since I last posted anything on here cuz I've been running out of songs to use. So I was looking through my notebook and stumbled across this one. This is another one of the first ones I wrote. It's not the exactly the work of a lifetime but it's not a stinkbomb either. Here you are. I hope you enjoy it.

Deep inside
The life within
Tries to find
What it could've been.
It laughs at me
When I'm brought down,
When I f*** up
And crash in the ground!

Chorus:

BUt when things
Go wrong,
There's no one to confide,
I've tried to escape
The terror inside.
Cuz it comes alive
Everytime I get denied.
No way to escape
The terror inside!

The thoughts in me
Begin to die.
You know I see it
In your eyes.
The hell inside
The soul you keep
Is digging ever
More so deep!

Chorus

Here it comes.
Are you ready? X4

Chorus X2

Here it comes.
Are you ready?
Here it comes.
You're not ready.

i luv the lyrics, i wish i could hear the rythm that goes with it.

yeah i just posted some new sets recently too. i liked it, it wasnt too complicated and the point was easily understood. chorus was my fav. part