Guess who

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  1. quickill said:

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    Been a while... feel's like it's been a long time... man uff it..

    They say heinsight's twenty-twenty
    But I'm livin' in the moment so to me it's kinda funny
    I see beasts I used run from now they runnin' from me
    And it ain't about the prestige it ain't about the money
    They can rob til I'm broke but they'll never take this from me
    And my girl still by my side it ain't even unbecoming
    We overcame a lot I still get that somethin something
    I been halfway around the world now halfway around the country
    From a stocked palace to a studio with nothing
    Now the journey just begins and you know I'll stop for nothing

    International made, internationally famed
    See I seen the lows of lows and I touched the holy place
    But nothin can replace the smile on your face
    Ha

    See I only gotta second because now my time is precious
    But tell em son I'm back but it's like I never left biiiiisssssh
     
  2. JD101 said:

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    Not bad nothing stands out..

    JD
     
  3. _SBU said:

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    nah Quickill usually writes stand out lines and this is no exception. I like it. the rhyme schemes are satisfying but I think that the content's the strongest element.. emotive but firmly grounded. plus all of the syllable placement's skillfully done, it'd sound good on track.
     
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    smoothtung said:

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    Yes well dispersed sylabol count, does sound good when read out loud. Yea Strong imagery but abruptness to the length of each punch line makes for a sick flow