Lonely Roads

Thread: Lonely Roads

Tags: heart-breaking, loney roads, sad song, soul-a-fox
  1. Soul-A-Fox said:

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    driving in this car on this lonely road again
    thinking of what can and can’t be said to friends
    another alone journey
    more of social learning
    slowly burning from the hatred inside
    its just the way us people start to think
    when survival is finally on the brink

    cold souls
    lonely roads
    thinking it through
    oh so more

    a passer by flashes his lights at me
    i look behind me to what he’s seen
    it’s a happy tourist
    honking his horn
    my deep thoughts left my ears cold
    not hearing a sound or what’s been spoken
    so i let the tourist past leaving the road open

    cold souls
    lonely roads
    thinking it through
    oh so more

    on another day i travel this same road
    there’s the same signs still as cold
    nothing changes
    not matter what
    so we have to live with what we got
    survival is true but it can be fake
    our lives is what of it we make

    the coldest souls
    on the loniest roads
    us dead people
    think so much more
    us dead people
    think so much more

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  2. pq92k said:

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    These lines are well-written: "my deep thoughts left my ears cold/not hearing a sound or what’s been spoken"
     
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    Jim Colyer said:

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    Loneliness and songwriting go hand in hand.
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