Whole Again

Thread: Whole Again

Tags: None
  1. Katie13's Avatar

    Katie13 said:

    Default Whole Again

    I had a six hour car ride that I had to fill with something. Hence the following:

    Staring out the window,
    Gazing at the rain,
    A old worn-out cliché,
    For heart-ache and pain,
    But here you are, sitting,
    About to go insane,
    Wondering if you’ll ever,
    Be truly happy again,
    In your head, softly,
    That annoying refrain,
    The one that laments,
    That things aren’t the same,
    You know that crying,
    Is completely in vain,
    But the feelings within you,
    Are too hard to tame,
    Yours have grown stronger,
    As his began to wane,
    Someday you’ll wake up,
    A new heart, new brain,
    And thank whatever,
    That you managed to restrain,
    Yourself from succumbing,
    Under his reign,
    But for now, you’re sitting,
    Looking at the rain,
    Waiting for your heart,
    To be whole again.
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

    Default

    Honey,you're in the game,this poem ain't tame,nothing to lose,everything to gain,this is hot as a flame!
    I love this,fan-f---king-tas-tic!
     
  3. Katie13's Avatar

    Katie13 said:

    Default

    Haha, thank you very much, Doug
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  4. Teshka's Avatar

    Teshka said:

    Default

    This is very identifiable, altho thats probably not the right way to say what i mean. Yea the rain, the rain, that always catches the blunt end of our thoughts doesn't it? Very well "spoken"
    Music is what feelings sound like
    Listen to the Love
    ~♥♥~
     
  5. Katie13's Avatar

    Katie13 said:

    Default

    Thanks, Teshka
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
  6. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

    Default

    I had to tell you,I don't have a printer,so.........I actually come to this site to read this,EVERYDAY!!!!I just love the heck out of this.Again,great piece of art.Oh,by the way,can't wait for your next loooooooong car ride!