I would

I wrote this for a friend of mine a week ago when she was feeling really down, should I try to make it into a full song or keep it a simple little rhyme?

you say your a burden
and if you were to die
tomorrow wouldnt miss you
and today wouldnt cry
but i know that i would
yes, i know that i would

if i should go for the full song this part will sound like this

you say your a burden
and if you were to die
tomorrow wouldnt miss you
and today wouldnt cry
but i know that i would
yes, i know that i would
i know that i would
i know that i would

If someone wrote this for me when I was sad . . . I would read it over and over and over, because it dispels (sp?) the true "false" thoughts someone develops when deeply depressed. The sadness ones feels becomes reality not only in feelings, but in thoughts, ideas, and sadly sometimes--actions.

This song/poem is a wonderful gift and a reality "anchor" for your friend to hear during those confusing times!

P.S. The title is perfect.