My Demise

Long ago I stared into the eyes
Of what would be my demise
I told the man that I would be
Something of the in between

He looked at me with questioning eyes
Am I the one to be your demise
The look on his face was one of waste
As I had no time and I must keep my pace

Further and further I walk the line
In order to hear a voice so divine
The man in the mirror
Told me to see clearer

The world in front of me
Was a world I would not believe
He said that the stars would be superior
And you would be inferior

But one day you would rise
Above all the lies
And see life from up high
And they will look up to you in the sky

Wondering how you got so high
So high up in the pale blue sky
Everyone will gaze in wonder
As the world will begin to lumber

Whispers will carry across the sky
Leaving behind feelings so high
Everyone will run but no one will hide
Because they know you can’t hide from your own demise

This is SO GOOD,it should be a song!Verses #3 or#5 could work as a chorus.CLAP!CLAP!!CLAP!!!This is a new way to say:Excellent Work!

Some aspects of it will probably be worked into a song I usually write poems first and use some of the lines and ideas to write songs so like one poem could equal 5-10 songs depending on the power of the poem.

I'm CLAP!CLAP!CLAP(ing)!!! as well. Superb job my sweet! <3

Copycat!