war is for the poor

this was the first song i ever wrote, its nothing special but how to improve it would really help

as med behind desks
give orders to fight
others put there life on the line
to extinguish the fright

they have no regard for life
when the rich create there war
they as well hold the knife
war is for the poor

they put my brothers out there
so the can rake in more money
but do they F**K as care
how can they think that this is funny

our soldiers die for a cause
which was not there own
they fight in all our wars
as they sit on there thrones

they have no regard for life
when the rich create there war
they as well hold the knife
war is for the poor

patriotism hasn't gone
but the wealth just wont care
oil and gold all in one
how can this be deemed fair

politicians spread there lies
lining there pockets with gold
while your sons and daughters die
do what they where told

they have no regard for life
when the rich create there war
they as well hold the knife
war is for the poor

this is the last bit
so you fat cat b*$!£"ds listen
go fight your own wars
go complete your own mission

Good stuff,I like it a lot.I've written a poem called War,but didn't have the guts to post it!This is a great song,with lots of Truth behind it!Keep it up!P.S.the more I read it,the more I like it!Thanks for posting.

thanks and you should post it, if its your opinion on something or even just something that you want to share then go for it, whats the worst that can happen ??

This fits in completely with today's world theme. You did a great job of capturing the mood.

I don't know "what the worse thing that can happen"and don't want to find out!If you think Free Speech is alive and well,you're wrong!Watch the News,then ask me,"What's the worst that can happen"!!!!

thank you kathyB, i think it needed to be put into a way which others could see what was truly happening and something its for our boys and girls at war.

and doug i see where your coming from with that they seem to want to sensor any and all who have a different opinion, however i believe freedom of speech is alive its just harder to hear