Not a sad song (stuff happens)

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  1. trueperfectionisimperfect said:

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    This is about how some songs are about how bad the world can be and how it effects us, but not many are about letting go, moving on and forgiving. As always imporvements welcome

    You hear songs about*
    How love can hurt
    How friends can fall out*
    when where pushed to the dirt*

    Stuff *happens we can't stop
    But don't let life go by
    Fight your way to the top
    And touch that big blue sky*

    This is not a sad song*
    It's here to show
    When life goes wrong*
    You have to let go

    There is no need to be sad*
    Don't even think about getting mad
    Just smile you way though*
    And reply hey f$%# you*

    Getting knocked down is life
    But getting back up is living*
    Live like there's no afterlife
    And learn to be forgiving*

    This is not a sad song*
    It's here to show
    When life goes wrong*
    You have to let go

    the bright side is when you should be
    Smile, laugh,dance and sing
    Do this and I promise you'll see*
    A life full of loving*

    *Once the rain clears*
    The sun will *shine on
    Your worries have disappeared*
    *your smile will soon belong
    **
    This is not a sad song*
    It's here to show
    When life goes wrong*
    You have to let go
    You have to let go
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Great rhythm,great rhymes,great song
     
  3. Frankie Jasmine's Avatar

    Frankie Jasmine said:

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    Excluding the expletive > I love it, TPiI!! I am really feeling you in this song! Excuse me, but what are the asterisks (*) about?
     
  4. trueperfectionisimperfect said:

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    Thank you both for the nice words
    And there there because i write a lot of my songs on my phone and when i copy and paste it on they just appear lol