with a heart of a child

With the heart of a child
hello everyone.
This is my new song, i wrote it today, i hope you enjoy it. it's about children
I'm 15 years old, and please report any errors because my english is not that good
And this is one of my first songs i've ever wrote !
Please leave your comment / feedback.

with the heart of a child

The glowing eyes
are open to admire the life
and the beauty of the world
can't we leave our mess*
and the jealousy
and the problems
behind and enjoy the life
with the full heart*
like a child

Hold the hand of the people
and walk through the beautiful life
go through the day with no worries
swallow your sorrows
fight against your pain
and show your smile


when you're a child inside
your problems would turn to a challange
your worries would be your laugh
And your hurt will be your love
When you're a child inside
you would wake up with a smile
You would sleep with a smile
and go through the day with a smile
with a heart of a child
go through the life with a heart of a child
with a heart of a child

watch the jumping kids
with a big smilie in their face
*joy and togetherness
well it's all we're after
hold my hand
forget your problems
care about the people
and show them your heart
and they would realize
the wonderful life was made for them

Hold the hand of the people
and walk through the beautiful life
go through the day with no worries
swallow your sorrows
fight against your pain
and show your smile

when you're a child inside
your problems would turn to a challange
your worries would be your laugh
And your hurt will be your love
When you're a child inside
you would wake up with a smile
You would sleep with a smile
and go through the day with a smile
go through the life with a heart of a child
with a heart of a child
with a heart of a child


when you're a child inside
your problems would turn to a challange
your worries would be your laugh
And your hurt will be your love
When you're a child inside
you would wake up with a smile
You would sleep with a smile
and go through the day with a smile
with a heart of a child
go through the life with a heart of a child
with a heart of a child
yes just with a heart of a child...

For 15, you are writing some very mature lyrics.

Originally Posted by Jim Colyer

For 15, you are writing some very mature lyrics.

Even for elders, the meaning seems EXTREMELY mature! Cause people tend to forget.

i really like it. and yay another 15 year old high five.

Thanks a lot!
I got many problems in my life in the past, and even now, and music always gives me hope to my life