1979

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  1. Jim Colyer's Avatar

    Jim Colyer said:

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    I had a house and a car
    The money was rolling in
    The New York Yankees
    Had won The World Series again
    My self-confidence
    Was higher than it ever had been

    I had a job with the State
    They taught me how to print
    Old Jimmy Carter
    Was trying to be the President
    Come Friday night
    The action was heaven sent

    1979, 1979
    Everything was fine in 1979
    1979, 1979
    I was the disco king in 1979

    She was out on the floor
    I knew it wouldn't take me long
    I wore a polyester shirt
    She had her bell bottoms on
    I was John Travolta
    She was Olivia Newton-John

    1979, 1979
    The world was mine in 1979
    1979, 1979
    She was my rock & roll queen in 1979

    We rode back to the house
    I talked her into spending the night
    We did it in the living room
    And the kitchen twice
    I don't remember her name
    My God! She sure was nice!

    1979, 1979
    Everything was fine in 1979
    1979, 1979
    I was the disco king in 1979
    She was my rock & roll queen in 1979

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    Jim Colyer Girl albums
     
  2. The Obscured said:

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    I like this. very personal and very to the point. I like the repetition of 1979, not only does it stick with you and the point of the song, but it flows nicely the way you've placed it. Good job man!
    We're a little bit stranger on the inside
     
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    Jim Colyer said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Obscured View Post
    I like this. very personal and very to the point. I like the repetition of 1979, not only does it stick with you and the point of the song, but it flows nicely the way you've placed it. Good job man!
    Thank you! It was a long time ago.
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  4. KathyB said:

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    I remember 1979......
    IMO...your 3rd verse should be a bridge...

    She spent the night
    we did it in the living room
    And the kitchen twice.

    The other I keep thinking is maybe
    I was the disco king part could be disco was king....the "I" is making me hesitate...I want to hear universal.


    This way you can change up the music and meter with a bridge.
    Kathy
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    1979 my birth year(I wish)Jimmy you've done it again!This I like,this I like.(See I said it twice)Give us more nice simple song lyrics,like this!Bravo,more,more!Almost 400 views in one day!What's going on around here?
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 09-25-2012 at 06:48 PM.