jack of all trades

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  1. Philip Wrobel said:

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    first post of trying to break through my writers block.

    jack of all trades
    just slip me away
    you see a person in these eyes
    but theirs only show a lie

    (intro music)

    this heart looks for heroes
    it looks for heroes
    this soul finds zeros
    it finds zeros

    now im feeling left out
    and im gonna shout

    jack of all trades
    just slip me awayayay
    you see a person in these eyes
    but theirs just shows a lie

    (whispers)
    how long this time
    how long this time
    how long this time
    how long this time
    (end whispers)
    its gonna end this time (yelled)

    jack of all trades
    just slip me awayayay
    you see a person in these eyes
    but theirs just shows a lie

    (instrumental)

    jack of all trades just slip me away
    you see a person in these eyes
    but theirs just shows a lie (yelled)

    (whispers)
    why dont you see a lie?
    why dont you see a lie?
    why dont you see a lie?
    (voice cracks)
    why cant you see my lie?

    if you dont understand it just pm and i can explain the background info to you i wont post it because this is linked to my fb account and would like to keep this out of the ears of people that i know.
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    "but theirs just shows a lie" I don't know what this is saying lol but other than that I like it keep writing u will break through that wall. Hey try writing about something really simple like a coke can or something absurd like your pet monkey I did one like that it helps.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    You Really Do have to sing this to appreciate how cool this is!(Cool is a word some of us old Beatniks use!)This "sings"right off the page!Excellent Phil,you're a force to reckon with!
     
  4. Philip Wrobel said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Johnb31 View Post
    "but theirs just shows a lie" I don't know what this is saying lol but other than that I like it keep writing u will break through that wall. Hey try writing about something really simple like a coke can or something absurd like your pet monkey I did one like that it helps.
    ill pm you the meaning of that
    like i said at the bottom i dont want this to come back to some people that i know
     
  5. Philip Wrobel said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    You Really Do have to sing this to appreciate how cool this is!(Cool is a word some of us old Beatniks use!)This "sings"right off the page!Excellent Phil,you're a force to reckon with!
    whats a beatnik?
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Google it.
     
  7. Philip Wrobel said:

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    oh haha
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Tee-Hee-Hee
     
  9. Philip Wrobel said:

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    are you really as old as im guessing, from what the wiki says? (im really really sorry if this sounds disrespectful, i just didnt find an age on your profile and my curiosity kills me, i dont mean any disrespect)
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    I'm 102 and proud of it!!!
    <See "Senior" Member!!
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 09-25-2012 at 12:10 AM.
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    Wow u have a lot of views how did u get so many omg lol.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  12. Philip Wrobel said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Johnb31 View Post
    Wow u have a lot of views how did u get so many omg lol.
    idk I am majorly surprised about it.
     
  13. Philip Wrobel said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Johnb31 View Post
    "but theirs just shows a lie" I don't know what this is saying lol but other than that I like it keep writing u will break through that wall. Hey try writing about something really simple like a coke can or something absurd like your pet monkey I did one like that it helps.
    now that i sent you the reason is "but theirs just shows a lie" a valid line or is it kind of off?
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    I agree with Doug; this is defo a song!

    I'm sure Doug isn't really 102. In truth, I think he's really the Bieber in disguise.

    Doug: That's for trying to read between the lines on that other thing
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
    :
    Rockers Unite! =>
    ROCK 'n' Roll Halls of Fame
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Only 2584 views?Come on Philmaniacs get your friends involved!We need another 2000 by Midnight!
    Phil,I'm surprised you didn't work in,"master of none" somewhere in the Lyrics.
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 09-28-2012 at 01:40 AM. Reason: Master of none remark
     
  16. Philip Wrobel said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by MoonRide*r* View Post
    I agree with Doug; this is defo a song!

    I'm sure Doug isn't really 102. In truth, I think he's really the Bieber in disguise.

    Doug: That's for trying to read between the lines on that other thing
    i feel stupid asking this but, defo?