Words to End It All

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  1. The Obscured said:

    Angry Words to End It All

    So this is the result of a lot of pent up aggression and hurt from some people over the years. Sometimes I feel like people take advantage of my good nature and trust. And so when some one finally put the last nail in the coffin so to speak, 'this' happened. This is a song is about karma and how I hope I'm there the day they get theirs. Please keep in mind though, that this is just pure aggression and was not censored for the sake of my music. It's a pure venting session. But I am proud of how I've written this and feel sooooo much better now. I hope some of you guys/girls can relate to this subject and can feel the tension through these words. Any critique is fine. Thanks for reading!


    Words to End It All

    Break it down
    Leave it where it falls
    Dead on the ground
    Left so wasted

    All the things you’ve known
    And the love you had
    Left to drown alone
    Suffocated

    Beat and tortured now
    Locked away inside
    But you know somehow
    You’ll find yourself numb

    So inject these veins
    With the reasoning
    Why this is alright
    But I question what you have become


    ‘Cause in the end,
    This is all you will have
    The world has left you behind
    And now so have I


    Shut your mouth
    Not a single word
    I’m done and walking out
    You’re left behind; I hope it hurts

    I can feel this build
    Deep inside of me
    I bite my tongue
    Harder until it bleeds

    Beat and tortured now
    Locked away inside
    But you know somehow
    You’ll find yourself numb

    So inject these veins
    With the reasoning
    Why this is alright
    But I question what you have become


    ‘Cause in the end,
    This is all you will have
    The world has left you behind
    And now so have I


    So f**k it, forget you
    I’m done thinking about this
    You pretend that it’s okay
    Well I’m telling that one day

    All the pain and hate,
    The rage that drives me insane
    Will come back around
    And drive you to the ground

    And your heart will burst
    While it bleeds hear these words
    In your head, through your mind
    Finally it’s time

    For it all, to come
    Full circle now it’s done
    And I lay awake
    Counting down the days

    ‘Til the world crashes down
    And knocks you from your place
    I’ll stand strong above you
    And I’ll shove it in your face


    IT’S DONE!
    We're a little bit stranger on the inside
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    Nice job really good lyrics I can feel the anger resonate off of the words of this song. It reminds me a lot of a linkin park kind of style I can almost hear them playing this song. I heard the verses as a rap almost I don't know if that was your intention or not but I really like this song a lot.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  3. The Obscured said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Johnb31 View Post
    Nice job really good lyrics I can feel the anger resonate off of the words of this song. It reminds me a lot of a linkin park kind of style I can almost hear them playing this song. I heard the verses as a rap almost I don't know if that was your intention or not but I really like this song a lot.
    it's funny you say that, because I'm not a huge fan of the music of Linkin Park. (Although their lyrics and showmanship is amazing, lol). And I guess you could rap out the verses, though it's not really intended. It is kind of quickly sang/screamed. I'm glad that the anger can speak through these words. Thanks for the reply!
    We're a little bit stranger on the inside
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Another almost 400 views in one day!What Is going on around here?