A hero

A heros *not the strongest*
A heros isn't always right*
They are brave for the longest
They fight with all there might*

A hero can be young or old
They just need to believe*
Your faith they will hold*
And your side they'll never leave*

In the heat of the war
When all hope seems lost*
They will stand and be counted*
No matter what the cost*

A hero to me*
Is not what you see on tv
It's a man who would risk his life*
To protect his child and wife*

Forget the super powers
It's a mum who work all hours
Put food on the table*
And put her child in a label

They travel the ends of this earth
To help one another
Not to prove the strength or worth
But to help a fellow brother

They make you believe in yourself
And that the sun will rise again
They are the medic to give you health
And take away your pain*

A hero never let's up the slack
When there life falls around there ears*
But they never hold emotions back
Because even heros shed there tears*

the line, "a heros isn't always right" sounds kinda off and the, " and take away your pain " also sounds just slightly off, but other than that its a pretty good song

Yeah it works! I think this would seem even better in music form. But I'm not seeing a chorus....?

I see what you mean phil, do you have any suggestions on what would make it better? They would be appreciated
And moon il see if i can think of a fitting chours to go into it and add the changes later

Phil,help him out,if you can.TrueP.,if Phil offers you some advice,I'd strongly consider taking it.He's one of the best on this site.