if you

if you could only see you, through my eyes
you would find, a pretty girl
you would find, an amazing girl
you would find (drags ind) (abrupt changet to you) you
if you could only see you
if you could only see you (drags out you)

you ask me how things can get better
they wont get better
you ask me how things will change
they wont change ( drags )
they wont change
they wont change (whispered)

if you,
could only see you,
through my eyeyeyes
you would find, a pretty girl,
an amazing girl
you would find you (drags out)
you would find you

you ask me how if things will end
they wont end
you ask me how you can change
you cant change (drags)
you cant change
you cant change (whispered)

(instrumental)

but(whispered)
(5 sec pause)

if you,
could only see you,
through my eyeyeyes
you would find, a pretty girl,
an amazing girl
you would find you (drags out)
you would find you
you would find ...
no need to change
no need to end (drags into the word if that makes sense)
no need to
(breath intake)
get bettererer (voice projected alot more in these next two)
to get better
(pause)
if you...

tell me if an errors or mistakes just wrote this 30 seconds ago. haven't done a proof read.

Phil,if this get 3000+views in a day,I'll start a Fan Club!Good little tune,but betterer?Just better will do.(If Frankie Jasmine corrects me,I'll be very embarrassed!)

Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe

Phil,if this get 3000+views in a day,I'll start a Fan Club!Good little tune,but betterer?Just better will do.(If Frankie Jasmine corrects me,I'll be very embarrassed!)

lol, betterer, jeez i feels stupid now

It was different!