this is a solemn goodbye (this is actually part of the song btw)
(music starts)
(short instrumental)
we had fun
ya
but now that time is done
ya
and this is our end
ya (drags out)
and this is my solemn goodbye
(pause for the amount of time of a short breath in)
(music starts again)
no more unnecessary lies
my solemn goodbye
no more painful ties
my solemn goodbye
and i said i wouldn't cry
but (breath in) its my solemn goodbye
we spent the nights
ya
and we had our fights
ya
and i wish you the best
ya
(music stops)
cause this is my goodbye
(music starts again)
no more unnecessary lies
my solemn goodbye
no more painful ties
my solemn goodbye
and i said i wouldn't cry
but (breath in) its my solemn goodbye
(music speeds up and gets heavier)
(instrumental)
no more unnecessary lies
my solemn goodbye
no more painful ties
my solemn goodbye
and i said i wouldn't cry
but its my solemn goodbye
I thought we where friends!
I thought we where friends!
I thought we where friends!
I thought we where friends!
I thought we where friends!
(everything stops)
but your no friends of mine (said just below a whisper where you have to strain to hear the words)
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my solemn goobye
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Phil, please tell me if I "hear" your song correctly:
The "we had fun
ya" part is slower, but speeds up with:
"no more unnecessary lies
my solemn goodbye . . . "
And the "no more unnecessary lies" part throughout the song keeps getting faster?
That's how I heard it in my mind, so you must have written the lyrics well--giving that feeling! I like this song because it's different, unusual;, it has meaning, but it's kind of fun too; the "no unnecessary lies" could really rock out!
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you got it exactly, and the unnecessary lies part not only is supposed to get faster, its supposed to get angrier
Originally Posted by Frankie Jasmine
