Don't Die

Okay so I started songwriting about 1 week ago I got into a lot and I wrote this song its my first proper attempt and I know it needs changing

Its about a boy who is in love with a girl who has a horrible life and doesn't want to live anymore and he doesn't want her to die


Chorus:
I don’t wanna see you die I never wanan say goodbye to you baby
I don’t want you to commit suicide and I don’t wanan see you cry baby
I just want you to stay by my side forever and ever baby

Pre Chorus:
We been friends since year 5
And I've always been by your side
Don't know what I’de do without ya baby Baby!!!

1st verse:
I said oi you what ya doing she said Oh me nothing really I said wanna see a movie with me? Then she shrugged her shoulders gently I looked down to my shoes then I noticed something under her arm and it was scars I looked up to her eyes and I realized!
2nd verse:
It was Friday night and we were out at the local park lying down on the dewy grass looking to the stars they where bright I just stared at you and then you cried I slowly placed my hand on your hand rubbing it gently saying it will be alright but I realized
3rd Verse :
(I am writing this now sorry dunno it yet tho)

Let it flow . . .