So Blind

I took some time
Had contemplations
Healing my soul
Nursing lascerations

I'm no closer to where I'm going
Than I was when I began
But I'm farther from where I started
When I started this futile stand

I'm trying to find
Something pure
I'm trying to find
My own cure
Seems it was in front
Of me all along
So blind, I still search
For where I belong

A heart of gold so heavy
It slows me to a crawl
I reach out to help them up
But I stumble and they fall

Sidelong looks and that's ok
Rushing away from my side
So clumsy, I am the fool
Do I have a reason to not hide?

I'm trying to find
Something pure
I'm trying to find
My own cure
Seems it was in front
Of me all along
So blind, I still search
For where I belong

Everything I touch
Turns to dirt
The love I give
Turns to hurt
As fast as I can
You still wait
But I'm still living
And you still hate...

I'm trying to find
Something pure
I'm trying to find
My own cure
Seems it was in front
Of me all along
So blind, I still search
For where I belong

I feel so blind...

A heart of gold so heavy
It slows me to a crawl
I reach out to help them up
But I stumble and they fall

those are my favorite lines right there. Simple and poetic but strong and revealing at the same time. I love reading your lyrics because they seem similiar to mine. Not only does it tell a story, but it reveals a huge part of who you are and what you go through at a point in life. Excellent job!

This I like.Same reasons;good rhymes,sound rhythm.Three choruses may be one more than you need,other than that,this is a song I can see being played.When I can "hear"it in my head,that's a good thing.