Girl from the emerald isle

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  1. mc2011 said:

    Default Girl from the emerald isle

    Rose by any other name
    Would still be as sweet
    But we all loose the game
    We all must accept defeat
    But when troubles cloud my mind
    And I feel like a lonesome fool
    I go back and find
    A picture upon my wall
    You truly had a heart of gold
    A ray of light shone through
    And if truth be told
    I still miss you
    That girl from the emerald isle
    Still makes me smile

    Oh, I could tell the end was near
    I was weak and I cried
    You whispered you had no fear
    I said nothing for foolish pride
    I hope i never caused you pain
    No worry nor shame
    For when your stuck in endless rain
    You can't ignite your flame
    I still have your necklace in a drawer
    You said it would make me stronger
    But if hopes and dreams washed upon the shore
    Wouldn't mean I didn't need it any longer
    That girl from the emerald isle
    Still makes me smile

    So sadly i sing that old song
    thinking can't bring back the past
    Everything soon goes wrong
    And good times don't last
    And as memories begin to fade
    New events will transpire
    But with me you have stayed
    You I will always admire
    And the shadows move from the light
    And I can finally see
    But some wrongs can't be put right
    Yet your spirit still runs free
    That girl from the emerald isle
    Still makes me smile

    Everyone crowded around your room
    Trying to hide their fears
    We all saw the darkness loom
    And could only express it in tears
    You flickered in and out
    And they all sang your song
    And we were all without doubt
    We all knew that we belonged
    And sitting by your bed
    Trying not to cry
    A subtle kiss on your forehead
    A final kiss goodbye
    That girl from the emerald isle
    Still makes me smile

    Any feedback would be appreciated
     
  2. Doug Denslowe's Avatar

    Doug Denslowe said:

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    Great rhymes,good flow.Is there a chorus?If you had broken up the stanzas a little different,I'd find it easier to get Song Lyric.Either way,good job,familiar story!