The Key

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  1. Katie13's Avatar

    Katie13 said:

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    I’m feeling out of my depth,
    But I think I’m starting to like it,
    Though I’m going to such lengths,
    To keep myself away,

    My brain is pleading but I can’t,
    I refuse to accept the end,

    I can’t help but start to fall,
    Into the darkness of your mind,
    Trying to answer your call,
    I’m scared of what I’ll find,
    But my heart’s encased in iron and stone,
    Until we find the key,
    I guess I’m sleeping here alone,

    Scars of mine still red and raw,
    I seem to forget them with you,
    And nothing scares me more,
    Than the idea I could love,

    My brain is pleading but I can’t,
    I couldn’t face the pain,

    I can’t help but start to fall,
    Into the darkness of your mind,
    Trying to answer your call,
    I’m scared of what I’ll find,
    But my heart’s encased in iron and stone,
    Until we find the key,
    I guess I’m sleeping here alone,

    We lay side by side,
    And stared at the sky,
    Talked the day away,
    And I was pretending,
    Pretending I wasn’t afraid,

    There’s something deep inside,
    Inside the darkness of your mind,
    Something broken I wish I could fix,
    Something that forced you to lie,
    But my heart’s encased in iron and stone,
    Until we find the key,
    I guess I’m sleeping here alone,

    I guess we’re both sleeping alone,

    Not very good. It's been a while since I wrote anything so I'm a bit rusty!!
    "If you were me, then I'd be you, and if I were you, I'd hide somewhere faraway..."
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    I love that you always trash your own work!It's not your best,but I like it a lot.It's better than most people can do,but I know you've got high standards and a gift to boot!