Who You Are (W.I.P.)

This is something I'm working on and I'd like to know if it's off to a decent start. It's pretty obvious what this is about so I won't get into it. Any advice or things that might be worded better, would be great. thanks in advance..It's only a verse and a chorus right now.



I can, I can see it
As it feeds on your mind
Hide the hurt, I know you need it
Even though you say that you’re fine

It’s no secret
I have seen the scars
That will stay with you
Please tell me who you are

I know you know
That this kills me inside
To know that you do this
Time after time…

Please tell me,
Tell me who you are…

Great start.I first read this Who Are You,thinking that it would have to be rechristened.But,at second look,it's me who needs to get glasses or learn to read!"Tell me who you are"I read as"Who Are You!"So,if you're familiar with the song "Who Are You"by the Who,there shouldn't be any crossovers.
Good Luck!