The fallen

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  1. trueperfectionisimperfect said:

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    This is just a start to this please help with improving it

    Cast down for what we believe
    Different to the divine
    Not gunna follow suit
    This life is mine

    To evil for your heaven
    To good for your hell
    You can cut our wing
    But our story we still tell

    Stayed true to ourselves
    Didn't follow heavens calling
    Followed what was right
    Now we are the fallen

    We where the highest knights
    Thrown to the in-between
    But we still fight for right
    on our shoulders you can lean

    We won't make the change
    We are proud of who we are
    Would do the same again
    Broken wings leave but a scar

    Stayed true to ourselves
    Didn't follow heavens calling
    Followed what was right
    Now we are the fallen

    We found own way to go
    We wear our hearts with pride
    I'm not saying where always right
    So follow this as a guide
    Last edited by trueperfectionisimperfect; 06-18-2013 at 07:14 PM.
     
  2. 2numbers said:

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    Only thing I would change is "too pure for your hell"

    But that is just me... This is your art. paint it as you see fit. In the end, it will be perfect.
    Last edited by 2numbers; 11-16-2012 at 06:41 PM.
     
  3. Matt6660 said:

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    Very good I agree with 2numbers