The Light

I know in the past you've had your heart broke,
Stepped on and walked over like you we're just a joke,
And it's hard to move on and ever be the same,
Be the girl you were before he played his game,
Now you've fallen and you feel like you'll never get up,
I want to be the hand that holds you when things are rough,
Get you back on your feet, put your trust in me,
Ill give my all to make you see,
You came into my world for a reason,
This is meant to be,

Let me be the light that breaks you free,
Pulls you from the darkness and here to me,
Ill never leave your side you'll never have to worry about being alone,
Because ill always be right by your side even when I'm gone,
You'll never have to feel afraid of feeling pain,
As long as you've got me I'll always keep your heart safe,

You're the best thing that's ever happened to me,
I truly believe this was destined to be,
No one has ever made me feel this way,
I know all of this sounds so cliche,
But words can't even describe what you do,
Or how much you mean to me, it's true,
I can't see the stars in the sky,
Because of the sparkle in your eye,
I can't even begin to explain why,
But I need you in my life,

Let me be the light that breaks you free,
Pulls you from the darkness and here to me,
Ill never leave your side you'll never have to worry about being alone,
Because ill always be right by your side even when I'm gone,
You'll never have to feel afraid of feeling pain,
As long as you've got me I'll always keep your heart safe,

You've made my life better than its ever been before,
Now I wanna do the same, you is who my heart is for,
I love you and that will never go away,
The only thing that changes is I love you more each day,
I know that the only one for me is you,
I hope inside your heart feels it too,

Let me be the light that breaks you free,
Pulls you from the darkness and here to me,
Ill never leave your side you'll never have to worry about being alone,
Because ill always be right by your side even when I'm gone,
You'll never have to feel afraid of feeling pain,
As long as you've got me I'll always keep your heart safe.

A little bit of editing and this would be just fine

Originally Posted by orsen

A little bit of editing and this would be just fine

Although I really like this,if you cut some words within the verses,it'd be easier to sing.When there's too many syllables in a sentence,it makes it next to impossible to vocalize.The rhymes are good,now work on the rhythm.