my first rap lyrics (add me as ur friend in fb if u like this)

this is my first rap lyrics

this rap maybe good
and it might be bad
and i need ur review and ill be glad
yo this is my first rap everyone i hope u hear and have some fun
when ill lay my hands on the gun...i feel like blade killing vampires on the sun
its funnny i know ill never rap .
i do give a try and it flows like a water tap
im a guy with a miami cap who sleeps near the fountain for a delightful small nap
look i try to avoid dirty words im a free and awesome thunderbird
this is for u u Fu***** nerds. skim the milk before it turns to curd..
ha ha
im a hardcore biggest fan of cm punk
while ***** "s lie on the road already drunk
take time and ryhme cause this is a rap
ill find u and kill u if u call this a crap
look man this world is over populating
and my maths problems keep manipulating
while life always remains complicating
fu** u dont disturb while im operating.

so this is my rap along with rhyme...
it will spin u back to time...
help ur self with red wine...
cause its time for us to dine...

yo i thought abt my childhood past
ill know that moments will ever last
i found only a girlfriend who was an angel for me
she cheated and wasted ...and was swept like a coral in the sea.
and went on starring at me . fuc* u girl ur a bunch of pee
hehehe
i dedicate this rap for these the good guys
who believe these girls and all their lies
its better to cut their bond and ties
before its too late
where the true lies

so guys im trying to be a rap artist
accept the fact
or ur a guy with no testis
guess what time"s run out
am i supposed to save or logout
last but not the least
becus im enjoying a big feast
for all u guys reviewing this post
thanks guys and lets make a toast

for this a
so this is my rap along with rhyme...
it will spin u back to time...
help ur self with red wine...
cause its time for us to dine...

lalala la la lalala lala lalala lalala lala
lalala la
lalala la la lalala lala lalala lalala lala
lalala la
guess its over<lalalala>
but im not blown my cover ill be back with a brand new rap
lalala la la lalala lala lalala lalala lala
lalala la
hahah

You may want to post this on the Rap site,just above this one.Look up,there it is!