The Truth

So it seems like forever since I've been on here. Looks like I got a lot of good stuff to look through In the meanwhile, I hope you can enjoy the newest song I wrote. First one in while. Everything in the "( )" is a background singer, screaming the lines...the music is rather...intense. :P

The Truth

To finally hear the truth I’ve wanted so long
(Shot down, knocked out; left out of place!)
How could the signs been read so wrong
(Shot down, knocked out; left out of place!)

To paint the image within my head
(Built myself up to just burn down!)
Now I’m left sinking once again
(All this hate is rushing out!)

But I’ll never make the same mistake
I see how well you play this game
Left behind for the last time…
(Mark my words it’s the last time!)

The switch has flipped inside my mind
From calm and collected to *bleep* up and crazy
You’ll see the difference in time
It’s all your fault; it’s the way you made me

So you say you’ll break things down
(And I took the bull***t you fed me)
I remember it all now
(Can’t believe, I let you change me)

You say I put it all on myself
(Even though I was fine before you)
You said, I made my own hell
(We’ll see just what it comes to)

But I’ll never make the same mistake
I see how well you play this game
Left behind for the last time…
(Mark my words it’s the last time!)

The switch has flipped inside my mind
From calm and collected to *bleep* up and crazy
You’ll see the difference in time
It’s all your fault; it’s the way you made me

Solo

The switch has flipped inside my mind
From calm and collected to *bleep* up and crazy
You’ll see the difference in time
It’s all your fault; it’s the way you made me

Not bad Obscured, I like it. The line (Built myself up to just burn down!) would flow better (imo) if it read (Built myself up, just to burn down!) but you may like it the way you have it. But all in all I feel the energy and angst in this song. Keep up the work man.