nothing left

The lights go out slowly
As the rain begins to fall
It's as cold as winter
As your breath begains to stall


I will not let you go
I'll fight for your last breath
I can't stand to see
this in your eyes
Forgive me for not
Bringing.you back to life

Close your eyes
One last time
You'll feel nothing anymore
You'll fade away
You'll fade away
There's nothing left to save

I will not let you go
I'll fight for your last breath
I can't stand to see
this in your eyes
Forgive me for not
Bringing.you back to life

Theres nothing left to save
Theres nothing left of you
Theres nothing left to save
Theres nothing left of you

I will not let you go
I'll fight for your last breath
I can't stand to see
this in your eyes
Forgive me for not
Bringing.you back to life

There's nothing left of me
Nothing left of me.

does this need work

"As your breath begins to stall".If this was your last line in the first stanza,it would at least rhyme.This is such a heavy subject,it's easy to understand the few Replies.I didn't the first time I read it,too heavy!Other than the one little line,this is good,as is.A little grim,but good,nonetheless.

I like that Doug. I have made the edit. Thanks ya I pictured this to be heavy. I have noticethat if you have a hard heavy song people do not reall reply to. And when they do they like it. Thanks

Rickey. I do listen to as I lay dying alittle but have not heard that song ill look it up.