time, time, time

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  1. Philip Wrobel said:

    Default time, time, time

    its
    time, time, time
    I stoped pretending
    and you
    know, know, know
    its not worth mending
    and i
    hate, hate, hate
    the pain your lending
    its
    time, time, time
    I stopped pretetending

    im done with your melencholy
    dont you even dare an call me
    kinda wish you never saw me
    and if i saw you in an ally
    id just pass on by, id just pass on by

    these are
    lies, lies, lies
    that ive been feelling
    wish i could
    try, try, try
    to fix your heart
    but i cant
    mend, mend, mend
    what dosnt mend itslef
    these are
    lies, lies, lies
    that ive been feelling

    im done with your melencholy
    dont you even dare an call me
    kinda wish you never saw me
    and if i saw you in an ally
    id just pass on by, id just pass on by

    is it
    crime, crime, crime
    to be happy
    is it
    wrong, wrong, wrong
    to plug my ears
    is it
    fair, fair, fair
    for me to hurt
    is it
    crime, crime, crime

    a friend of mine told me to stop pretending i cared about them its annoying so yeah....wrote a song....
    Last edited by Philip Wrobel; 11-30-2012 at 09:25 PM. Reason: half the song was missing :P
     
  2. LooknGlass said:

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    You can have something here my friend. I like the first two versus, although I suspect the 1st was a chorus start. I think if you put more versus in and keep the 1st verse (or Chorus) as the repeatable chorus, this baby will start to flow. Since the title is time, time, time I would keep that one. I like the melancholy verse a lot. Keep those fingers writing man, you're on to something.