This Damaged Soul

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    SljSlj said:

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    THIS DAMAGED SOUL

    This damaged soul
    Makes peace null and void
    Who do we blame?
    The soul itself?
    Or the world in which we live?

    There is no end to violence
    Not until the world is silenced
    Men killing men
    There is no end

    This damaged world
    So unreal it's absurd
    Do we call it insane?
    It's just the norm these days
    ****ed up time in which we live

    There is no end to violence
    Not until the world is silenced
    Men killing men
    There is no end

    Some just wanna see fire
    To watch the flames grow higher
    Over a fallen empire

    Lost and damaged soul
    Never meant to see this world
    Do we blame God?
    Do we blame God?
    For a man falling apart at the seams
    In a world following suit, it seems

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  2. LooknGlass said:

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    You have some great lines in this. I like it. What genre did you have in mind for this? By the way, I particularly like the lines
    "There is no end to violence
    Not until the world is silenced
    Men killing men
    There is no end".
     
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    SljSlj said:

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    I've no particular genre in mind. I'm partial to metal (specifically prog metal), so I'll probably do something that fits into that genre if I ever record this one.

    Thank you for your kind words, friend.