What comes together must fall apart

Verse one:
Everything that once felt like something;
now feels like nothing.
Trust was once a good friend of mine;
but now its traded for a bag of lies.
What comes together must fall apart.

Chorus:
I needed every part of you.
But you gave me nothing to hold onto.
I'm slowly slipping away.
Search for the words you need to say,
so we can bandage up the wounds.

Verse two:
Everything that once felt like lightning;
now feels like thunder.
Instead of going ahead; always falling under.
There's no truth inside a heart.
What comes together must fall apart.

Chorus:
I needed every part of you.
But you gave me nothing to hold onto.
I'm slowly slipping away.
Search for the words you need to say,
so we can bandage up the wounds.

Bridge:
What comes together must fall apart
There's no mending this broken heart
I should've known right from the start
You'd leave me here sitting in the dark
What comes together must fall apart
What comes together must fall apart

Ideas for a bridge/third verse would be wonderful and much appreciated :-) xx

It's Train time baby!The line;What falls together must fall apart.I'd use;What comes together must fall apart.Two falls don't make a right!

I love that!! Thank you so much :-)

Originally Posted by RickeyJoe

What comes together must fall apart
There's no mending this broken heart
I should've known right from the start
You'd leave me here sitting in the dark
What comes together must fall apart
What comes together must fall apart

Rickey,Traingirl got a great piece of writing from you,Bravo!
Now,change the Title!

I cant figure out how :/

Originally Posted by Thatsmeonthetrain

I cant figure out how :/

Go Advanced!

Yeah man! That would be awesome.

Wow!!!What a combo!!!!

This is some good stuff!! Hats off to you, good job. Some really great lines in here.

I tend to think its awesome.keep it up.bravo!

Thank you both!

Though discovered only today (Train belated,lol) I hold in my hands another precious piece of your heartbleeding and it's just fine,
very fine, Traingirl. Your look at life from all corners is so surprisingly colourful . Love it<3

Thank you so much, you are too sweet.

It's really good! I loved it!

Thank you Tania so sweet!

Sounds like an outtake from Rumours, you know that famous album by Fleetwood Mac. Stevie Nicks singing the verses, Lindsey Buckingham the chorus, both of them singing the bridge. (in other words: it's a great song)

Originally Posted by Peter Both

Sounds like an outtake from Rumours, you know that famous album by Fleetwood Mac. Stevie Nicks singing the verses, Lindsey Buckingham the chorus, both of them singing the bridge. (in other words: it's a great song)

It sounds like a song off Rumours..........I've heard the outtakes,this is better!

Oh wow guys! Thank you both so much (: