Venus in The News

verse
Teacher tracked me
Down like a
Bloodhound after
School one
Day

There's been a
Mistake, she said
I had meant to
Give you an
A

First I'll need to
See your D
Could you pull that
out for
Me?

chorus (2x)
Venus was my teacher's
Name, wanted to give me
A shiny A for my
D

verse
Made my D
Disappear, I
Took her A.
I owe you
Vee

Not at all
she Said she
would Try
harder
when she's
Doing her
Grades

Pleased to have
Caught you
and Rectified my
Honest mis-
-take

chorus
Venus was my teacher's
Name, wanted to give me
A shiny A for my
D

Must have been my luck-
-y day because she caught me
Off of school proper-
-ty.....

Originally Posted by RickeyJoe

Strange topic for a song but it's well written. I like it.

Did you find that the story translated as being about a school teacher who sleeps with her students? That was my intent to convey, while masking it behind a wink.

DeShaun, you're a genius. Yes, your meaning came across clearly through "double entendre." For me, because it is double entendre (extremely well done), I like it. If it had been said graphically, it would have been too heavy, too too . . . As it is, Repeat: You're a genius.

P.S. I hope this song is heard as a warning message to teachers and students . . . but I doubt it will change the trend of irresponsible adults.