Šako Polumenta - Ljepoto moja (Serbian)

[ZkQHEH3YnFk]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZkQHEH3YnFk[/video]
Any suggestions?

Kad me noć k'o naša ljubav, opije
When the night makes me drunk, as our love does.
Ovaj vazduh među nama, zapaljivije
This air between us, ignites
Dovolnja je jedna iskra, tvog pogleda
It's enough just a spark, your gaze
Samo jedna nježna rijeć i gorim ja !
Only one gentle word and I'm burning!

O kako zna, da mi se da
Oh, how she knows to get attached to me
Svako dugme s košulje, kad pokida
Every button from my shirt, when she tear it
Nekad gruba, nekad nježna
Sometimes is rough, sometimes gentle
Al' uvijek vjerna, slobodno traži
But always faithful, Ask freely for
Šta ti je volja, ljepoto moja.
Whatever you want, my pretty

Bićeš moja zauvijek, to dobro znam
You'll always be mine, I know it well
U tvom zagrljaju dušu, odmaram
I rest my soul in your embrace
Dodir svojih usana je kratak spoj
The touch of your lips is like a short-circuit
I svaki put je prvi put, živote moj!
And every time is first time, my sweetheart! (my life literally)

O kako zna, da mi se da
Oh, how she knows to get attached to me
Svako dugme s košulje, kad pokida
Every button from my shirt, when she tear it
Nekad gruba, nekad nježna
Sometimes is rough, sometimes gentle
Al' uvijek vjerna, slobodno traži
But always faithful, Ask freely for
Šta ti je volja, ljepoto moja.
Whatever you want, my pretty

Nicely done, the only suggestion I have is this one: oh, how she gives herself over to me

Hey there, you have a problem with those lyrics as they have commas in wrong places, therefore you made mistake in translating. My suggestion is to listen the song yourself and try to practice by writing down words as you understand them and then look for online lyrics. And also my suggestion would be to avoid the website you are using lyrics from, they write words and verses incorrectly there.

Ovaj vazduh među nama, zapaljivije it is Ovaj vazduh među nama zapaljiv je
This air between us, ignites it is This air between us is flammable
There is no comma and it is adjective there, not verb.

Dovolnja je jedna iskra, tvog pogleda it is Dovoljna je jedna iskra tvog pogleda
It's enough just a spark, your gaze it is One spark of your glance/gaze is enough
Also there is no comma here and "tvog pogleda" is in genitive not nominative.

O kako zna, da mi se da it is O, kako zna da mi se da
Oh, how she knows to get attached to me it is Oh, how she knows to give herself to me
Get attached means vezati se, to tie yourself to someone else.

The rest you translated perfectly, but lyrics in Serbian are just wrongly written...
Hats down to you, Marius!

Thank you and I sure I could do it better if the lyrics would have been correct , and again many thanks for the advices I will try to write them by myself

CAN SOMONE (native serbian ) make a own trans ?

Šako Polumenta – Ljepoto moja

Kad me noć k'o naša ljubav opije
ovaj vazduh među nama zapaljiv je
Dovoljna je jedna iskra tvog pogleda
samo jedna nježna riječ i gorim ja

Ref.
O, kako zna da mi se da
svako dugme s košulje kad pokida
Nekad gruba, nekad nježna, al' uvijek vjerna
Slobodno traži šta ti je volja, ljepoto moja

Bićeš moja zauvijek, to dobro znam
U tvom zagrljaju dušu odmaram
Dodir tvojih usana je kratak spoj
I svaki put je prvi put, živote moj

My beauty

When night intoxicates me as our love does
this air between us is flammable
Only one spark of your glance is enough,
just one gentle word and I am burning

Ref.
Oh, how she knows to give herself to me
when she rips every button off my shirt
Sometimes rough, sometimes gentle, but always faithful
Ask freely whatever you wish, my beauty

You will be mine forever, I know it well
I rest my soul inside your embrace
A touch of your lips is a short circuit
and every time is the first time, my life

There you go, Yosis

thank for the trans
this song has stolen from this song
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V88N5GEYAOE

I like original much more! Tnx Yosis, can't figure out how is it possible that you keep all those tunes inside your head and have patience to browse trough all the songs world wide!

Originally Posted by milijana

I like original much more! Tnx Yosis, can't figure out how is it possible that you keep all those tunes inside your head and have patience to browse trough all the songs world wide!

THE Credit of this song is to a Serbian composer
The name of the right composer is "Raviv Ben Menahem" AND not "Goran Kiridzic"
This song was a hit a few years ago in Israel ....