Everything

[Verse 1]
I feel the touch of your soul
Clearly a night so warm
You're love is strong like beauty
and its leading the way

Your power is so great
The truth becomes so strong
You leave me no choice
but to come along

I fall for you
This love is so true
Just Let the night
Sing us away


[chorus]

Your all i need
Your everything I wanted
Your everything I need
So let us be willing
To find the way

[end chorus]

The day came so quick
Your leaving so soon
Why can't you see
The way I feel about you

I made a mistake
so Let me be honest
I didn't mean to


[chorus]

Your all i need
Your everything
Your everything I wanted
So let us be willing
To find a way

[end chorus]

I thought this over
I thought this through
How couldn't I see
What you would do


So beautiful
are you
I feel amazing
When im with you

We met that day
A long time ago
Our love was strong as ever

I took the last chance
To gain your trust
I can see clearly
Now That we are together

Our love is strong
Your beauty is power
We can last
Forever

I know its rough as #!@% but its a start so let me know what you think

Amazing job man 12 years old your gonna rock this site. We should write a song together maybe let jenny help us.. probably not lol ;-). I'm really Impressed!!

Thanks Man and yeah just hit me up!

"Maybe let Jenny help us.. probably not"
Meh. You poop face.
I love you guys (:
This is really really good Josh. I'm proud of you!

Thatsmylittlebrotheronthetrain;great little song.to be totally honest,I like the stanzas that rhyme better than the ones that don't.That's just a personal opinion.Nice work,little brother.

haha.

thanks doug, yeah thanks for the input

Originally Posted by JoshD

thanks doug, yeah thanks for the input

That's what I'm here for.

JoshD: A "start"?? If this is the beginning, I can't wait to hear more . . .

My favorite lines:

You leave me no choice
but come along [Do you mean, though, "You leave me no choice but to come along?]

and

Let the night
Sing us away

LOVE that one!!! Seems it came so easily to you. You deserve a female point of view, JoshD! Not only guys are on lyrics.

it is the beginning and there should be more soon

and yeah i did mean to come along i wrote this very fast

thank you so much!

Josh is my dog I think he's my brother in some alternate universe. He and I are fixin to rock out and do some recording it's gonna be epic.

thanks alot

Oh Yeah!