The Playwrights Last Melodrama

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  1. Eccer's Avatar

    Eccer said:

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    Welcome!
    To our grand
    30 years of music/drama
    Masquerade ball!
    Guests shall stay in the gallery
    Where you may eat, drink and dance
    For all is yours today
    Remember, the author
    May very well be one of you tonight! =)
    Keep a watch, and he might surprise you
    Have a wonderful evening


    Drink thus all of your champagne
    For tonight's a game
    In which you will change
    Wear thee mask
    And be wary
    The peering eyes
    If your secrets are to be
    Now, let up
    And look around
    See who's that lurking about

    In shadows
    The writer revelates
    His last memoirs
    Of quills
    Whispering in the loom
    And where the walls breached
    The sheets flew
    Across the ballroom
    High above with
    "Almost
    Silvery like appearances
    In the moonlight
    "

    Listen
    For theirs
    Behold clues amidst pages
    Of hidden truth
    Learn doth
    His masquerade and
    Witness
    A mass before a
    Giant passion play

    "Focus..
    The picture of dreams lies beneath
    An obsession..
    "
    ...and
    None where like this
    One particular fellow
    I guess he stared to long
    So focused he kept on
    Revealing his love

    That's when I realized
    What the music told me
    While champagne
    Havocked within
    Intertwined and introspective
    "Conscience awakened
    So they say
    "

    He was
    Laughing at the fountain
    Perfectly blending
    Amongst the crowd
    A pretty cover indeed
    What a fine evening it was
    Until
    I stabbed him
    A hundred times, maybe
    Perhaps a little bit less
    It felt like.....nothing
    Though
    It was good anyways

    And as clichè as ever

    I
    Made the fountain red that night
    Like he did
    That
    time
    When I found my family
    Hanging
    Bled dry by their open arteries
    Their paint upon the curtains
    Forever portraying
    His love for smashing red
    Mediocre melodramas

    Last edited by Eccer; 05-26-2013 at 08:00 AM.
     
  2. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said:

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    Very good job man it's very eloquent.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
  3. Eccer's Avatar

    Eccer said:

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    Thanks Johnb

    It was very refreshing to write a poem again
     
  4. Frankie Jasmine's Avatar

    Frankie Jasmine said:

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    Eccer, excellent writing! Reminiscent of E.A. Poe's "Mask of the Red Death" in style and fright-factor. I usually cannot handle extreme violence (in any art!). However, when set in another era, it feels classic to me (hence, less personally threatening, because our real lives are indeed violently threatened!). I would say this defo has a classic feel! Well done. I will come back to read it again and again, to gain more from your excellent style.
     
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    Thanks alot =)

    Just read "The masque of red death" what a fantastic piece! I guess a dude going mad at a masqurade ball is very common nowadays lol.
     
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    Yeah . . . no "masque" or concealment necessary. :l