you are a slave to the system
bowing your head to
every mother****er that gave you ****
step up, be a man
fight your battles with furious anger
you are a warrior
don't let **** bring you down!
what you gonna do?
burn it down to the ground
spread it's ashes all around
rip that ****ing thing apart
stick a stake right through it's heart
make it suffer make it scream
don't stop till it ****ing bleeds
chew it's bones and salivate
it's your time to annihilate!!
your life is your own
don't be ordered around
be immovable as stone
in the storm of life!!!!!!!
though you get knocked down
should you get back up?
don't give in there's more to ****ing fight for
stand your ground, let it come
man versus world an apocalyptic battle
you reign supreme
the master of you own fate!
let me show you what to do!
burn it down to the ground
spread it's ashes all around
rip that ****ing thing apart
stick a stake right through it's heart
make it suffer make it scream
don't stop till it ****ing bleeds
chew it's bones and salivate
it's your time to annihilate!!
your life is your own
don't be ordered around
be immovable as stone
in the storm of life!!!!!!!
though destiny be cruel
you learn soon it's true
so become hard as steel
to face what is real
in the storm that is life
your one choice is fight
for what you truly feel
what you want to be right!!!!!!!
now learn from this what to do!
burn it down to the ground
spread it's ashes all around
rip that ****ing thing apart
stick a stake right through it's heart
make it suffer make it scream
don't stop till it ****ing bleeds
chew it's bones and salivate
it's your time to annihilate!!
your life is your own
don't be ordered around
be immovable as stone
in the storm of life!!!!!!!
HAPPY NEW YEAR ONE AND ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!
Last edited by Mixalopoulos; 01-07-2013 at 07:31 AM.
Love the refrain,you know me,if it has rhythm and rhymes,I usually like it.Also like the third stanza,same reason.It's nothing you haven't said before,just this is said so well,Bravo!
I liked the title, and the lyrics could have been awesome...bearing a name like that.
However...there's a few things to be worked on. I get your point and all, its just that using swears should be done deliberately and not just thrown out there. You have anger and a powerfull meaning, use it in a modest way Compress it and release it when time comes...slowly and accordingly.
Storm of Life
Compress it and release it when time comes...slowly and accordingly.
