Remnants Of A Fallen Kingdom

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  1. JeffOpium said:

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    In a sacred text he wrote of his life,
    Of love and hate divine,
    Which through his eyes bled.
    He is the last of his kind.
    A heartless man trying to find a reason
    In this life.

    He gathered his things when he saw the world returning
    To be left behind in his goal.
    In privacy he thinks to himself: "Why have I grown so cold?"
    Longing for what he'll never have
    His conscience grows weak.
    His voice grows quiet until he can't speak.

    Tired and wandering eyes
    Scope across desolate land
    How did it come to this?
    All that's left are remnants of his fallen kingdom.
     
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    amaryn said:

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    Jeffopium! A overdose of pessimism and bitterness:"how did it come to this?"
    For sure, our world is in a mess, but let's rock some injections of goodwill into it, won't we?

    Welcome on the poetry thread
     
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    Johnb31 said:

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    Nice job I like this. :-) Tired and wandering eyes
    Scope across desolate land
    How did it come to this?
    All that's left are remnants of his fallen kingdom.

    This reminds me of my poetry series The Silent Echo it has that same sort of idea.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    This is:Someone To Watch!!

    I said it first!