Melatonin Stirs

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    Eccer said:

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    Past eviction date

    The day I was forced of the bicycle
    My cycle turned upside down
    Voices bloomed, madness crept
    Saw the ground swell
    Thought the end was here
    Convinced I was damned
    Seems like my heart disappeared
    A few.."sometimes"
    And I was in this strange haze
    One compared to the strongest receipts given at a medical care
    Up and down this wave of motions
    Like an echo within
    Nearest a pine cone
    Where the melatonin stirs
    This, however I bear to tolerate anymore
    Those lousy nights with no sleep at all
    Should abandon this life
    For Jannah, how I miss yours gentle chime
    I smile, bearing the thoughts of her
    Will, is just an arms reach
    What lies beneath
    Guiding me
    Tween the distance
    Eyes triangle fields
    Where I put my hands
    On faith for
    A normal day
    To arise
    Again
    Last edited by Eccer; 01-17-2013 at 07:16 AM.
     
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    Glad Miss Insomnia has hit others than me too,lol Well, dreaming about a warm embrace is proably better than counting sheep.
    Honestly, I hope you'll get over it without running to the drugstore
     
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    Thank you for understanding my problem. This is an slightly dramatic version of my "insomnia" though. I wrote this at work, having no sleep at all
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Eccer View Post
    Thank you for understanding my problem. This is an slightly dramatic version of my "insomnia" though. I wrote this at work, having no sleep at all

    Going to a gig and having to sing without any sleep the previous night it's a massive nightmare. I know how you feel!
     
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    ****, that's even harder! How did you manage that gig? xD
     
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    Opening my mouth as little as possible to prevent me from yawning
     
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    Now this is a Poem!!Great work,unusual font!Very.......poetic!
    Last edited by Doug Denslowe; 04-08-2013 at 07:37 PM.
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Doug Denslowe View Post
    Now this is Poem!!Great work,unusual font!Very.......poetic!
    Yea, great work, coming str8 from the heart.

    (Now, i find myself hanging on to Doug's words)
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by curiosity_kills_the_cat View Post
    Yea, great work, coming str8 from the heart.

    (Now, i find myself hanging on to Doug's words)
    I could say something............but it's too easy!
     
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    Eccer, have you been recovering ever since?

    @Doug: this is the font Eccer prefers to use, I suppose. I've seen him using this before. Haven't you?
     
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    Well, both yes and no.
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by amaryn View Post
    Eccer, have you been recovering ever since?

    @Doug: this is the font Eccer prefers to use, I suppose. I've seen him using this before. Haven't you?
    Why,yes I have!Am glad you inquired!