gone but never forgotten

i was unsure about how i wanted this to be seen, so i put it in both lyrics and poem, sorry. hope you enjoy it

You went and left
But it was not by choice
You went and got summoned
By the almighty voice

I may just be selfish
But you where taken to early
We all wanted more time with you
But you where taken unfairly

Gone from this world
And our insides feel rotten
But in our hearts you remain
Gone but never forgotten

Every man has his time
But surely yours was cut short
Place seems more intense
With out your holding support

Life seemed to be strong
You could see it's light in your eyes
Even when you started to fall
You stayed strong to say your goodbyes

Gone from this world
And our insides feel rotten
But in our hearts you remain
Gone but never forgotten

Yer your body has gone
But your soul is by our side
Helping us all thought the worst
Still your here as our guide

We all try harder then before
Pushing ourselves till the end
Doing it in your honor
Hoping it will help us mend

Gone from this world
And our insides feel rotten
But in our hearts you remain
Gone but never forgotten

Truely, many of us have lost someone dear and it bl''dy hurts like hell.
Whether the almighty voice is available is a interpretation which is allowed, but I have my personal doubts!
Still, I can feel your pain.
If it concerns you:Be strong TPI!

it does indeed, it feels unfair and unjust :/
i feel that when someone close dies even those who dont believe (like you and me) like to believe there in a better place or looking out for us thats sort of what i was trying to portray with that.
thanks its getting easier over time and with my friends help and my love of writing songs/poems it really helps me find peace

Good to hear you don't mess things up too much! Life is for living,lol

Originally Posted by trueperfectionisimperfect

i was unsure about how i wanted this to be seen, so i put it in both lyrics and poem, sorry. hope you enjoy it

You went and left
But it was not by choice
You went and got summoned
By the almighty voice

I may just be selfish
But you where taken to early
We all wanted more time with you
But you where taken unfairly

Gone from this world
And our insides feel rotten
But in our hearts you remain
Gone but never forgotten

Every man has his time
But surely yours was cut short
Place seems more intense
With out your holding support

Life seemed to be strong
You could see it's light in your eyes
Even when you started to fall
You stayed strong to say your goodbyes

Gone from this world
And our insides feel rotten
But in our hearts you remain
Gone but never forgotten

Yer your body has gone
But your soul is by our side
Helping us all thought the worst
Still your here as our guide

We all try harder then before
Pushing ourselves till the end
Doing it in your honor
Hoping it will help us mend

Gone from this world
And our insides feel rotten
But in our hearts you remain
Gone but never forgotten

Oh Dear!

"You were taken",sounds better than "where taken"by I could be wrong.