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  1. trueperfectionisimperfect said:

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    this was inspired by one of the pics shared by amaryn. Its one of a graffiti face on a wall where disaster has happened.

    The world watched its self burn
    From the cruelty of man
    No easing of the pain
    Soon as it began

    The world looked around
    And couldn't believe what she could see
    The world was in ruin
    How could this be?

    Could not take it any more
    Couldn't cope with the upheaval
    She closed here eyes tight
    So she could see no more evil

    She listened intently
    To the screams and the cries
    To the men shouting orders
    To the men telling lies

    Her mind is a mess
    With the folks tongue hissin’
    Raises her hands to here ears
    So she doesn't have to listen

    Now she oblivious
    To the world we are now
    We cause her much pain
    She has no time for our vow

    Listen to the wind
    The rain and the snow
    No words in the air
    Where there was long ago
     
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    amaryn said:

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    You're welcome, Trueperfectionsimperfect! Indeed, that picture is a staggering one, the place in the Ukraine one of the shame spots on Earth
    Thanks for putting it in your own words.
    Sometimes pictures can be a source of inspiration, I find. You obviously do too!
     
  3. trueperfectionisimperfect said:

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    aye it really is, when looking at it all i could imagine was the face been the world or mother nature and then the 3 signs of see no evil hear no evil and speak no evil and the out come was this poem. Thanks for the inspiration
     
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    This is very good,although I getting tired of this subject.This could be a great tune,if you used the third stanza for the chorus.Like I said this is good,one of the few that's worth reading again and again.
     
  5. trueperfectionisimperfect said:

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    yer good shout its a subject which needs to be put to rest for a while. cheers buddy thought id give poetry a go for once lol
     
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    Doug Denslowe said:

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    I stand by my above Comment;this could be a great song.This is the best compliment I could give!