Obsidian

Its been awhile since I have written a poem I hope this one gets me back in the swing of things. I wrote this in 10 minutes so bare with me.

A day of endless rain
Brings on that aging pain
The one that echoes through
The hearts of man and you

Try and ignore its feeling
And it will leave you clinging
To all of what you didn't know
This is the world the real show

Climbing up through oblivion
You will find a world of obsidian
Infested with sheer darkness
You will feel the emptiness

This world that lies within you
Is a world that is so true
It seems so hard to perceive
That this world is to believe

And that all that surrounds
The world and it's grounds
Is the sea of obsidian
In the world of oblivion

But it is this sea of dying dreams
That has waves that cause seams
To leak darkness throughout
This is the fountain of doubt

So when we sail through our seas
Our seas of darkness and broken dreams
Will we find a cure to its spreading
Will we find a way will we find our heading

So we can carve out our future
Before we are devoured by our own creature
Which has been created within our minds
He is the greatest master of lies

So come on now let's find a way out
Lets remove all of our doubt
And find a way to shine upon our darkness
And find a way to remove this emptiness
The darkness of man

Awesome

Marvelous! I'm running out of adjectives to describe your work.
This. Is. A. Problem.

Hi John! Well, I bore with you, to use your words.
That you look for a solution in the end
"so come on now, let's find a way out" was really needed
to avoid constant lamenting and wondering whether
you find life as abominable as it seems to come out from point A to point X
Thanks for making the effort worthwhile. Keep going, you Crazy Diamond

Hi John, this comes from a deep mind, definitely. Well done. (Is "creacher" like a 'synon-phone' for "creature"?) I don't know the word.

Haha sorry that was a major typo i was thinking of the urban dictionary creacher which is the combination of creeper and teacher which is a creepy teacher i meant creature though lol.