Lullaby for the weak

Verse one:
The moonlight shines down on your face
As you take my breath away
Your telling me that I'm the one
You've got me coming undone

Your words they make me weak

Chorus:
I can't keep up with your pace,
as your arms wrap around my waist.

Your fingers trace my bones,
hold onto me you're not alone.

Sing to me as we fall asleep,
the lullaby for the weak.

Verse two:
My lips tremble when we kiss
I can't describe what this feeling is
Your telling me that I'm the best
As I lay my head on your chest

Your words they make me weak

Chorus:
I can't keep up with your pace,
as your arms wrap around my waist.

Your fingers trace my bones,
hold onto me you're not alone.

Sing to me as we fall asleep,
the lullaby for the weak.

Bridge:
With each word I'm getting weak
You know exactly how to speak
(Lullaby for the weak)
With each word I'm getting weak
You know exactly how to speak
(Lullaby for the weak)

You're and your, do you know the difference?

It's just stumbling to read this.
"You're fingers trace my bones" Which describes "You are fingers trace my bones"

Was this your intention? Or have I completely misunderstood? Let me know

Lullaby for the Weak is Lullaby of the Week!This is great stuff,Traingirl!Toot!Toot!

LOL. I feel like an idiot. My ipod (which i posted this from) always auto corrects your to you're.
Sorry for that! I fixed it

And Doug, thank you I'm glad you like it!

Traingirl: A beautiful lullaby indeed and very singable as well! I liked the words you choose. Actually I loved everything about it.

Keep that train rolling, Traingirl. You deserve to travel without a ticket!

Beautiful song, with much feeling and musicality. I hear a lot of piano when I read the lines. And a crescendo in the bridge building towards the final chorus.

Originally Posted by Thatsmeonthetrain

LOL. I feel like an idiot. My ipod (which i posted this from) always auto corrects your to you're.
Sorry for that! I fixed it

Lol! Well that explains it Now I can finally read it.. but

To be critical, I am not fond of these types of lyrics, you have skills, so use them for greatness! (Like you did on Shadow kissed) Keep it up!

Its okay Everyone has their opinions. I like to switch it up when I can.
Thank you for the feedback!

What kind of lyrics are these? And I love the song it's got good flow and well written besides your typos lol

What do you mean by "kind of lyrics?" lol.
and yeah well you know.