see what you think of these lyrics all comments good or bad welcome

"Since When"


Since you been gone I spend my nights alone,
missing the touch of your lips miss hearing your voice on the phone,
times we spent nights hearing your deep moans,
now since you left I never leave the house its crazy,
my friends say I’ve changed an that I’ve turned lazy,
I’m drowning my sorrows my thoughts lost in JD.

But!

I could call you an ask if you would take me back,
I could pretend you would say yes an things would be alright,
I know subtlety is what I lack,
but with out you there by my side I find it hard to sleep at night,
but I’ll try to move on,
I’ll try…

So I see your already moving on,
somehow I knew it wouldn’t take you long,
I’ve given up trying to be strong,
already I’m disappearing from your thoughts,
it seems in your spiders web I’ve been caught,
now your gone I’m forgetting what I was once taught.

But!

I could call you an ask if you would take me back,
I could pretend you would say yes an things would be alright,
I know subtlety is what I lack,
but with out you there by my side I find it hard to sleep at night,
but I’ll try to move on,
I’ll try…

I…

must sit down I must relax,
my thoughts are racing caught in your tracks,
where I could beg you to take me back,

my love is lost my heart is broken,
would it matter to you if these three words were spoken,

I love you…

I love you…

the impossibilities of finding someone just like you,
is ridiculous you know its true,
but you lost your dignity in the barfly loo’s,
since when was it that hated me so much,
since when was it that you gave away your love,
I thought what we had at least was our trust,

But!

I could call you an ask if you would take me back,
I could pretend you would say yes an things would be alright,
I know subtlety is what I lack,
but with out you there by my side I find it hard to sleep at night,
but I’ll try to move on,
I’ll try…

But!

I could call you an ask if you would take me back,
I could pretend you would say yes an things would be alright,
I know subtlety is what I lack,
but with out you there by my side I find it hard to sleep at night,
but I’ll try to move on,
I’ll try…

I’ll try.

Wow! You know, this song hits me pretty hard. My girlfriend just broke up with me for someone else and, to be honest with you, this song in basically a narrative of everything that I think about. All that aside, I think you did a very good job. You created a situation everyone can relate to and vocalized it without being cheesy like a lot of other people who try to do the same thing. Good job!

OMG!
you wrote that?
this song is so good, anyone can relate to it and ya, sorda like he just said.
well except i am a girl and i don't have a girlfriend! lol
the truth is I LOVE IT!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!

Very catchy verses. Clever. and very easy to identify with by the listeners. Good write. Hope you have music for it.

who wrote it? u?

I love the whole song but the first words since you been gone are too kelly clarkson!thats just what i thought of when i read it !and thats not nessicarily (i know the spelling is off i'm too tired to fix it!) bad!

These lyrics are pretty awesome...a little similar to what I'm going through, but of course not completely the same. But people can definitely relate to that.

What kind of music are you going to put it too? I think they are great. i agree that the first part, "since you been gone" is a little too kelly clarkson, but overall i think they are great. nice work.

Hey maybe you could.....u know change the lines where u go.....crazy and lazy.

I mean the crazy line is ok but the second ond could be..."messed up in the

head n a bit hazy" and that line where u go "I thought what we had was at

least our trust", you can add a line to it like "But i guess it was more like a one

time thing called lust". Nice song, really i hope you dont mind just trying to help.

those are really good, they're really meaningful and its good to relate to! i like them!

thanks for quoting my lyrics mate rescently put up some more called "the quest for dollars"
have a look see what you think sorry for the delayed reply its been a while since i got back to me comp lol thanks again dude!

Originally Posted by lv*u*kaylz*u*lv

hiya cool song d u hav msn

hey sorry i dint reply to you earlier i do have msn here you go! :0)

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