'want you back'

Intro;
sometimes you can love someone,so much that you can't stand losing them...no matter what happened to make what you share come to stop..

(VERSE 1)

I keep thinking of you
each an everytime
writing this sad song
hope it gets to rhyme
I wonder why baby
you never see
all those cute things out there,that we can be.

We belonged together
like popcorns and movies
I used to like it alot
everything we're doing
I said 'I love you boo'
but you were just copy-pasting
now I fully know it's me you're erasing.

HOOK:

You made me cry coz
you broke my heart
but I'll always cherish you,like a priceless art.

{CHORUS}

We were one thing girl
kinda stiched-up
now I'm all in pieces
who's gonna fix me up
I'll never let go,
I really want you back.

I made my mistakes
you did yours too
but still we're the best-fit
so true so true
I'll never let go
I really want you back.

(VERSE 2)

Baby you left me alone
now I got these scars
and thinking you'll never come,will only make me worse
I gave you my love,heart and all I had
Im still holding on
though it seems like the end.

<BRIDGE>

Eight billion people
and still want to be with you
it's something about you,that got me stuck on you like glue
if hurt is loving you
then Imma take that pain
I know you'll be my rainbow again,whenever it rains.

(c) 2013 WILSON GITAU KINYUA.

Indeed, Wilson: love and hatred or misunderstanding or failure are so closely entangled that blind love relationships seem to outsiders
grizzly, dangerous, naive and horrifying
The Damocles sword of failure and disappointment always looms above you
It'll be hard to find anyone who hasnot gone through that and 60% of all songlyrics are about it: sometimes I wonder if anybody ever gets tired
of it, but no!
You made again your own version. Thanks for that!

Awww thanks.;-).yep,breakups and broken/hearting hearts are always at times a part of the relationship.

"We belong together like popcorn and movies": original and good! Overlooked it the first time.....

I waited a while to reply,that way it's a better "bump"!I love the "popcorn and movies" line,but Wilson,do you need to use "Boo"?It's so.........overused (to be kind)but you know what I mean.I think it takes down the song a notch,but that's just my opinion.Another great little tune!

Babe, need more descriptions eg...Pink...."Just give me a reason"....

When you talk about scars that is strong and deep stuff but you need more to cement the image such as Pinks lines below...

It's in the stars
It's been written in the scars on our hearts

Keep working it...rewriting is good for the song and your soul!

Yeah,so true.:-).i'm thinking of rewriting the song..thanks alot you all.