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    I can't hold my tongue, its like I'm speaking to amateurs, I came to end ya time like the great mayan calenders, behold its the man of wise words, premeditate your rap career before committing the crime first, my Adlib I have none, the savage I am one, the plastic I do pack some, crashing I go head on, I'm the true beast of my time not that untalented prik, not only kicking your Azz but I'm stompin ya kid, their ain't no stopping these hits, I'm the great like Ali on the top with these classics, y'all are mindless souls, I'm advanced in the next lesson, I'M THE GREATEST so next question?, I'm on top of the game you boys on the bench restin, so quit stressin, I'm mel Gibson, my lyrics are a lethal weapon, Luke I am your father and I'm not talking about the reverend !!!

    *dam*you*boys*better *step *ya*game*up

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    Default BackInBlack's body bag

    Born with a mic, defying average fetus, Raised in the concrete jungle venom spitter
    Smoke weed elevating to a higher plane of conscience, let me show you new ways of being black, nigguh
    Sniper to your forehead, Black Shot, Left jab to your spine, Blue black
    Convince you to take your own life, Black Thoughts
    You ain’t prepared for hunger, I bring the new drought
    Everyone is a rapper now, wow you must be jokin son
    I’ve been in this game since God made you write bad psalms
    Folks, this b1tch spends 99% of his lines trying to sound cool, like yo
    ‘I wanna write multi-syllable rhymes too and sound big when I am small’
    ‘I wanna write how good I am since I’ve got nothing important to talk about’
    Precious diva, shut the fuk up
    You lucky we ain’t in the battle scene, I would have whooped your as$ to the ground
    Now let me show you some elegance b1tch, thanks for the compliment
    What I write is classic, my ink is from the fountain of youth
    Push you down Cypress Hill since Hip-Hop isn’t your field
    I use Immortal Technique when all your help came from AllTheLyrics
    Claim you the best but that is what martyrs are for
    Burn you to a cinder and rip your eyes open with a pitch fork

    I got more multis than a maltese the size of a werewolf, my tide stays Tsunami even when it isn’t the full moon, I cut your throat with your ignorance since your voice is miniscule, Don’t test my patience, hospital patient, your bars are only sick because you need medical attention, When I am a victim of overactive imagination, you a crash test dummy with a bloodstream, place you in the middle of highway 101, Collide you with a Lamborghini, Ferrari and Mercedez Benz all at the same time

    My lines stay fresh and relevant like a pair of Jordans, You trying to score when all your shot fails like a broken rap record

    Check it

    I take rap to new heights like the pyramids of Egypt, ruler of Underworld like the hip-hop underground, call me Anubis
    My rhymes stay nutritious though I don’t need supplements, I am a smooth criminal the way I murder beats
    No one cares about a benchmark of what a great rap artists is, dik rider, the sky is the limit
    I guess this is a reality check then, brethren, the only thing you good at is writing sentences that
    DON’T MEAN SH!T

    (I have actually rapped in local rap battle leagues and won a few but lost to many but at least I have what it takes. You think you lines are so great use it)
    Last edited by Kyle Tao; 10-05-2014 at 01:08 AM.

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    Its artist like me that got hip hop started
    Dumb *** lyrics that you learnt in kindergarden

    Talking bout blunts and dumb **** bout a monk
    son i make you wonder how i always get in front

    I learn my education, soon to get a graduation
    stars like jay z are my inspiration, now listen

    Simple rap is ll you ever needed
    now come and suck my **** son you just got defeated

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    (to start off with i feel so sorry for rappers like you)

    I dont need to be smart
    or to know my mathematics
    to know your using lines
    from the song survival tactics
    your plagerising lines
    from the bottom of ma heart
    dont feel like you've won
    and get back to the start

    if you know the bible then you know
    you your messing with son
    i aint your friend nor your anything
    this is a battle to none

    i only found this site just a minute ago
    already shredding you to peices
    coming out your front stereo

    you better reply, i think you owe it to yourself
    im even making this ryhme
    a poetic in my own right

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    (Hey, welcome, Caleb)

    I eat Caleb raw, son, trading my humanity for puns
    You think you raw, son, I eat amateurs for breakfast
    You think you fly, son let’s see if you can survive the Fall
    Like Lucifer I gave you a new direction, though it is still Hell
    I play God the way I bring thunder to this game like Zeus
    Putting leashes on you puppies like a Cerebrus
    Spend more time looking at your flaws, son
    The sun isn’t so great at dawn

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    First off celeb rawson, im the chief the commander i am raw son, you write raps like my daughter does poems, only difference is she mastered the technique and she's only 6 yrs old, but back to ya b.s. mathematics, i spit raw, sewage make a gimmick like you be asthmatic, similiar to an ebola outbreak make ya puccies panic, im the don the majesty, destruct ya verses on every line causing catastrophy,im diabolical, stressed out homicidal, my lyrics put you to rest shhhhh suicidal,you want my tek or my rifle, carry two guns on the west side like fivel, your not on my level or even same page, filled with violently rage, another wave of mass destruction for letting the real BEAST out the cage

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    When Caleb raps is it truly that pitiful? Or am I being cynical? He ain't lyrical, if I assassinate him now is that a miracle? Go back to kindergarten, if you can't even spell that, you have no business calling other people's lyrics retarted. And you can't even call beast out? Well then peace out, your rhymes are like Ebola man let the disease out, in a minute when I kill you they gone have to let the deceased out, you're obviously dreaming, let me take you to a place where they snort more cocaine than a pig's snout. Where all my homies is thugs, said they ain't need mathematics and ended up turning into a bum. Next to a whack rapper like me, you're little more than a bug, all I see is your shoulders, there's little to nothing above. Just another kid who thinks he raps tight, but will never take flight because he never developed his skills on the mic. Jay Z being your inspiration is an embarrassment in itself, I'm bad, but your lyrics are barely reggie compared to my top shelf. Smoking mics like crack pipes,

    I ran out of stuff to say, I'm gone get picked apart bad 😂 I suck

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    Back in black,
    I'm gonna attempt to write raps like this so called rapper. Multi syllable Ryhme schemes haha.fuk outta here.....

    I'm the d.c. sniper
    Get the job done
    Now pay the piper
    Make multi syllable rhyme schemes you ain't mcgiver
    Submission tapout piledriver
    Ya raps are horribly basic
    Face it
    This is how you write raps
    Shi*t is crap
    Lyrically you suck at this
    Don't quit ya day job your
    Not use to this
    Im the pursuer b*tch
    My lyrics are sewer sick
    Yours are garbage kid
    J hova on to the next trick,
    Got 99 problems back in black ain't one
    Smash his face in the dirt
    Homie this is my turf
    Feelings hurt? Take
    Off ya favorite skirt
    Get murked lyrically
    Inspiration is typically
    The type of knowledge
    I get bibically
    Back in black screaming
    Finish me
    His raps are history
    You got homo tendencies
    Envy and jealousy
    Your lyrics literally
    Are disgusting me
    You aint a "g"
    That you claim to be
    Put ya face on a milk carton
    Mama screamin violently
    The type of death you see
    On unsolved mysteries
    Im not the type to brag
    And boast
    Im a humble dude
    Smack ya bit!hy attitude
    For even attempting to
    Take the crown i am the king
    Im on a higher altitude
    BACK IN BLACK
    this is ya last warning
    Invade ya residence
    With me and my goons
    And its not a house warming

    Back in black anyone can"rap" like this. Your ok i won't deny that. But when you say only you and robbmack or whatever his name is are the only 2 that can rap .really? A real mc or rapper can acknowledge anyones freestyle no matter how sucky they are. So get it right your not at all on the top ten list

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    Aweh L.A

    Now for back in black,

    If you coming to get me,
    You wont get far cos im sneaky
    Sneaky vec in a bar, pardon
    im fresh with cigars and a sweet leaf,
    clean, sqeek squeek, sneaking with cream an its leaking.
    I mean i lean on a beat, what do you
    mean you defeat me?
    This homie is done for,
    A fun war but now im here to make your
    Gun sore, spitting in toumges until the
    Clip it slips n splits ya lungs more
    now take a breath b
    Can i get you a pepsi?

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    Im back again, no pad or pen, only time you get brave is with jack and gin, who you challengin, I'm the best when? How about now and then, they say time is money so imon a full grind, no respect for the kid they say i have a cruel mind, in due time, i hold them thangs high its tool time, take ya top off like a tupay, lyrics hit harder than bobby bushay, make ya girl go two ways, step in the booth get mauled in the lions den, king of this rap sh*t battle me i defeated most of the higher men, i spit hot tracks capable to inspire trends, on another dimension ya can't see me, can't reach the heights that ive reached, with a personal genie, marked as a failure,a wannabe, a hot spot on the top spot for the real mc's, only time you held the steel was a cook a mickey d's, im back at it, the criminal that packs plastic ,a genius like einstein i dominate mathematics, im the whole package, ask back in the black the fag is my fanatic.

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    Aweh another quick one,
    lets toke on a type, got my scope on
    a mic n lit smoke to focus in flight
    Other emcees are simply locusts n mice
    Soaked in some rice, i havent
    tasted but yeah you knowing its nice
    You posers try to poker your price but
    Ima roll , i stole a cold one and diced
    Right to the left and kept my sights
    on the steps, tight tokes of type reflect like
    light from breath,
    until you frieghtened but
    Check,
    i hit back and put kid black in the dic k sak,
    Or ball sack whatever prick you fall back,
    Tall cat? No
    Im sure you caught that bro,
    and if you cross its bcos the
    lord said so
    i pour red flow with more sword to cut the chords of your pencil,
    Homie applaud cos i just reformed your sort of hip hop dilemma
    With a tip top tremmor to put your drips into wristlocks better,
    better tap before youre trapped chap

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    Yo vector nice flow. By the way what does aweh mean?

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    Props to you guys, good lines and nicely written.

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    Imma reply the thread I've just come back from the dead lyric so hot *****s shot me in the head. Aight yo imma dig myself up outta this grave get a shave and go to a rave and read th lyrics I was gave. They ain't my fav they suck now than a **** on a Saturday I Gus's it's cause it's madhatter day time to go out and play you know what they say I can do this all day while doin yo girl on the bay whil you sayin no way. Are you ok? Nah I think you gay. It's Time to spit a feestyle hold up sorry this might take a while throw all my lyrics in a pile maybe put em in a file. I'm just spitten whatever because I never say never gotta go in beast mode I should probably pull that lever cause I ain't that clever I'm blonde and dumb I think I'm drinkin to much rum while yo Girl is still swallowen my cum. **** she squirted in my eye never mind I'm just to high I'm so fly I'm in the sky but why? **** I'm Fallin down imma die I fell on my face now I'm blind my brains outta Order I think I have a disorder it's now the size of a quarter wait did I get shorter what's that noise a mortar nah I'm just hearing things again I think I need to count to ten its over but when? I'm to tired to continue...

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    Default For L.A.(LyricalAssassin)

    You call yourself Lyrical assassin but it's more like lyrically asinine
    I come in this fukin' b1tch blastin', I aint rappin' just to pass the time
    Mothafuka you've got no passion but ya think you're a mastermind
    I've proven myself with every action and I keep doin' it time after time
    Line after line in rhyme after rhyme I've slaughtered you ya fake 4ss trick
    And ya caint see me, while I'm on c.d. you be on some eight track sh1t
    And ya makin' it way too easy for me to easily bring that payback b1tch
    And payback's a b1tch so ya want me to quit but I don't play that sh1t
    You get hit, I spit sick, much too sick to worry about you slick, it's true
    I spit it, wicked when I kick it, kickin' big sh1t terrific and when it's through
    I'll move on to the next joke of a competitor that's amateur and massacre them too
    I'm a sit back and laugh as they keep comin' wit' raps that never seem to improve
    I don't care if ya hate, ya caint articulate that well enough to make me stop it
    Coz despite what you've thought it's a fact that I don't just talk it, I walk it
    Been known for walkin' on the block wit' rocks in my socks and in my pockets
    So you can lick my cok it's time to chalk it all up, who's the next chump on the docket?

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    Quote Originally Posted by L.A(lyrical-assassin) View Post
    Back in black,
    I'm gonna attempt to write raps like this so called rapper. Multi syllable Ryhme schemes haha.fuk outta here.....

    I'm the d.c. sniper
    Get the job done
    Now pay the piper
    Make multi syllable rhyme schemes you ain't mcgiver
    Submission tapout piledriver
    Ya raps are horribly basic
    Face it
    This is how you write raps
    Shi*t is crap
    Lyrically you suck at this
    Don't quit ya day job your
    Not use to this
    Im the pursuer b*tch
    My lyrics are sewer sick
    Yours are garbage kid
    J hova on to the next trick,
    Got 99 problems back in black ain't one
    Smash his face in the dirt
    Homie this is my turf
    Feelings hurt? Take
    Off ya favorite skirt
    Get murked lyrically
    Inspiration is typically
    The type of knowledge
    I get bibically
    Back in black screaming
    Finish me
    His raps are history
    You got homo tendencies
    Envy and jealousy
    Your lyrics literally
    Are disgusting me
    You aint a "g"
    That you claim to be
    Put ya face on a milk carton
    Mama screamin violently
    The type of death you see
    On unsolved mysteries
    Im not the type to brag
    And boast
    Im a humble dude
    Smack ya bit!hy attitude
    For even attempting to
    Take the crown i am the king
    Im on a higher altitude
    BACK IN BLACK
    this is ya last warning
    Invade ya residence
    With me and my goons
    And its not a house warming

    Back in black anyone can"rap" like this. Your ok i won't deny that. But when you say only you and robbmack or whatever his name is are the only 2 that can rap .really? A real mc or rapper can acknowledge anyones freestyle no matter how sucky they are. So get it right your not at all on the top ten list
    ...Um Okay... yeah... right... obviously you don't know much about the dynamics of writing rap lyrics, you don't even write in a "bars" form which is they way almost all great artists compose their rap lyrics. As far as me being "okay", well, I know that I'm better than "okay" and I and any intelligent rap lyricist can easily see that I'm far better at this than you are. So without further adieu...

    Fuk you b1tchboy, you aint sh1t
    I laugh and light another cigarette
    Aint nada that I gotta admit
    You sorry little fagb1tch
    Fuk all of you, I've conquered all of you worthless idiots
    All I do is fukkin' kill all of you sh1tty tricks
    I'm fukkin' pitiless
    Fuk your sentiments
    Honor's somethin' you gotta earn so fuk bein' considerate
    Every fukkin' diss is vicious and deliberate
    L.A you're illigitimate and belligerent
    And ya lyin' coz there aint no denyin' that I deliver it
    While 99 percent of the time you spit gibberish
    I'm a beat you harder than I'd beat ya mom's clitoris
    Punk, to give props to slops I have no interest
    It's a battle so if ya don't like the diss cry me a river b1tch and bear the bitterness
    Last edited by BackInBlack; 10-06-2014 at 04:21 AM.

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    Multi-Syllable Rhymes

    Once a rare treat, multis are now being used in hip-hop more and more frequently as lyricists constantly try to outdo each other. Multis aren’t necessarily harder to write than normal rhymes. They just take extra effort. You’ll find that the effort is well worth it. Spit multis, and get your vitamin C.
    What are multis?

    Multi is short for “multi-syllable rhyme.” Multis are phrases in which more than one syllable rhymes. Multis can be double, triple, quadruple (etc…) rhymes.

    Normal rhyme: cat / hat
    Multi rhyme: my cat / hi-hat
    Or a longer multi: bit my cat / hit the hi-hat

    Southern rapper Ludacris loves featuring multis in his verses. His trademark delivery (in which he slows down and emphasizes the rhyming words above all others) works well when he slips in clever multis. Check out any Ludacris song for quality multis, or check out the lines below, which he spit during a freestyle while performing at Yale University.

    My life savings, I made it in shows,
    Then lost it on my way to Yale, ‘cause I paid it in tolls

    What’s the difference between multis and in-rhymes?

    In-rhymes:
    The fact is I kick phat raps, so know that
    Not just one, I roll with my crew, you step back

    Multis:
    Ain’t no need for wondering who’s the man,
    Staying looking right always an exclusive brand
    – Big Daddy Kane, “One Day”

    Both Together:
    This is a job – I get paid to sling some raps,
    What you made last year was less than my income tax
    Why Use Multis?

    Multis are hallmarks of all the dopest flows, and all the best rappers use them. They are more complex and more impressive than normal rhymes and so command a lot more respect. Multis add variation to your verse and will help you craft better rhymes.

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    The content and concept is more important. You don't write lines just to fit that description. I see your ideas are all over the place. One bar you talk about something, the next you talk about another. Let me give you an example of something I wrote with multis AND concept

    One too many times I stay awake while the city sleeps
    Calculating a thousand steps when all I need is a leap of faith
    Propose to my inner demons like a fallen angel deserving a second chance
    Expectations reduces life’s expectancy to a staggering percentage

    The whole 4 bars talks about struggles. I understand that freestyles are meant to be flexible but how stupid do you sound when you can't be on point. You think labels are going to sign you just because your sentences are made with multis. Go study Wu-Tang Clan, Nas and Mos Def.


    By the way, are you even ANY good at writing poetry and songs. Rap requires EQ and IQ. When all you do is diss and sound angry. You aren't a child (perhaps you are). I don't know how you can consider yourself good. You have the most deluded view of self-worth.
    Last edited by Kyle Tao; 10-06-2014 at 09:32 AM.

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    Fuk you chump. I K N O W that I'm better than you. Better than all of you. I don't only write rap lyrics. I've been writing rock, metal and punk lyrics since I was 15. It's been 18 years and I have written plenty of masterpieces. By the way your example of multis doesn't even rhyme! How you gonna call it rap when it doesn't even rhyme you stupid *****?! Get the fuk outta here. I haven't read one good pair of 16 from any of you mediocre fools. Fuk off. It aint off topic when it's all about how you novice ***** fools suck.

    I'm the terminator, vermin hater, in this like Schwarzenegger
    A force of nature, got all of you crock jocks locked in the torture chamber
    I'm doin' the world a favor, like a savior, it's all in the operation
    And I don't need cooperation, I'm indeed contemplatin' depopulation
    Got a preoccupation with violence and ya caint walk away from an anvil to the face
    You all despise me and ya despise me rightly but I don't give a fuk who ya hate
    Who ya rate true or great, I'm in no mood to debate you fakes, my apathy is great like the Great Bambino
    But you deseases and skeezers really caint understand me though
    No repo, I keep it one hundred like a fukkin' C-Note
    I'm way ahead of you jokes, if ya don't think so then you can deep throat
    This d1ck for days, so who really got some sh1t ta say?
    Just when you think you got me figured out I call an audible and switch the play
    The offence gets away and suddenly before ya know it's first and goal
    Yo, I might be insane and it's probably ingrained in my DNA but I win games wit' a perfect flow
    Mercin' foes like a workin' pro and for sure I'm puttin' in the work
    I'm never tirin', firin' endlessly at these enemies and I put 'em in the dirt

    16 bars of multis you just got served
    Last edited by BackInBlack; 10-06-2014 at 06:21 PM.

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    Aight to your rap was aight but if I were u I'd stay outta site all day and night your probably white you don't fight U might just bite and call it good cause you were beaten so bad you were stood up like a little pup. You say you made a master piece I've heard way better raps from my niece. You actin like Percy Jackson searching for the Golden Fleece. You also said you have been doin this since 15. You actin like you have been shifteen. Who do you think you are the next eminem you might wanna keep tryin again and again. You can't concentrate try doing some zen. Close your eyes and count to ten. Your raps so bad people buyin em with yen. I'm still laughin how you say you better than everyon else like I said earlier ive still heard wy better raps than my niece chelse. You ain't a pro you know I even bet your girls a ho. Bro with these raps you ain't gonna make any dough so I hear your a Co at a strip club sayin u work solo. Your a ****in fake we got beef and imma cook you like steak or beat the **** outta you until you break. Ittl be a piece of cake that I shall bake. I'm only 12 and still write better than you if people heard you on stage they'd yell boo beat the hell outta you with a shoe. I'd be laughin cause that song is new too. FCK steak I'll cook you like stew. Imma heat you up and boil you show you how mr. Slick do. Ooh th crowd b shoutin while you sittin there poutin I'm scoutin to see where you are. Get in the parking lot and run you over with a car yellin that im the star you would try to run away but wouldn't get far. I go to the bar actin drunk as FCK slap your girl so we can buck **** so big it got stuck. I kept tellin her to cluck while I'm runnin amok while shes still on my **** she got aids and I didn't know I thnk I'm sick call her back callin her a prick go back to her house and beat her with a brick while she throws a punch and kick. She's screamin nick nick stop before I call a cop squeeze her neck so hard until I hear a pop. As you can tell my raps will make it to the top.

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