Battle Rap: Freestyle Only

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  1. _SBU said:

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    My words are "unreliable"?
    Ill's are ill-advisable.
    His bars aren't "justifiable"- just defiable.
    Yeah they "antigravital"- ..undefinable.

    Your bars aren't anti-gravitational, just lighter weight.
    Damn that isn't quite the same. why debate?

    Saying "diabolical" and "phlebotomy"? What kind of plan was that?
    Hey I bet you're great at scrabble but you're cr*p at rap.
    Your words got a long length but that ain't a strong strength
    Coz your content's not got context.. what next?
    (That was a rhetorical question,
    Not me prompting you to post again.)

    Your rap's pathetic; matches ethics; crass and wretched, lax and fetid.
    And it's possible "monocle"s topical coz you lack perspective.
    Saying you're dissing every member is an excuse because your rap's generic.
    Man, if I'm mad "predictable" you're mad prophetic..
    Check it..

    Yo, I'll take out illwill's eyes; call him 'llwll'.. damn bruv..
    'llwll' kinda looks like a man with his hands up.
    Ok, I admit it,
    that's a reach.

    Wanna diss every member? then you should do it.
    You dissed DaKing? use your head or you'll lose it.
    You dissed Mike50, guy's busy with music.
    You dissed Robb Mack? damn, that's dude's elusive.
    You dissed Alliance? the guy you should truce with.
    You dissed Money like you're some kinda Buddhist?
    And you dissed that Zeus kid? he ain't even lucid.
    You dissed James Laing? hey fam, are you stupid?
    Tried dissing me? who you got me confused with?
    'whats my name', 'on top of my game', like Papoose hits,
    Plus I'm working on the 'cure' for you like Badu did.
    Yeah I'll grab that 'W' from Ill Will, this is 2sick.
    Tryna take all ATLs?
    Yeah you'll take all 80 'L's

    Hey..
    Tryna diss every member? Ill Will..?
    I dun run through the list like it's Kill Bill.
    Your score's still nil.
    It's Ill Will...?
    It's 'final testament' kinda venom his quill spills.
    It's Will's myth but I'll help him escape that state; I got Brill's skills.
    and

    Ill Will's myth: my viral presence
    Kinda like I Am Legend's final seconds
    ...
    "Phlebotomy" what?

    Yo..
    Um..
    Pill 'til sill trill frill fill grill hill Jill Phil mill drill thrill
    Those are spare ones.
     
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    Young Akol zeus said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ill Will View Post
    Ur bars r so despicable
    My rhymes r irresistible
    Ur bars go in circle
    so their nothing but predictable
    My bars r antigravital
    going international
    I speak open minded
    So u know I’m speakin rational
    My bars speak with action
    Causing mad reactions
    Man they’re so ill
    They’re the center of attraction
    There people in the world
    Dying cause of hunger
    And you guys don’t care until
    They’re six feet under
    Your words r unreliable
    Ur bar bars are so deniable
    I had a rough life
    So my bars are justifiable
    People make fun of me
    Saying I should where a monocle
    They say its cool
    I call it diabolical
    They say that its probable
    I say its not logical
    The chances r small like single celled particle
    I’m sayin psychologically
    That when people step aside with
    I get a new flow
    Like the blood in phlebotomy
    Nikka ya spit cabbage' ya pushing top bet like J F K ' sock side nikkah you can't rap I bet you can't bath' my bars bless ya fackin' family left you optomize
    I valice this wack cat as I'm diggin his grave next to your favorite emcee'
    Is blood line' inner core' you B*TCH nikka can't climb click' as I'm the mason' ma bars kill devil advocate'
    Lord assosiate all trial' this clawn is cocking like really G ' u dissing us with Wack Sh*t

    I eat you like bread' n chips ' killing you is too easy I do it with ma eyes close
    You can't crack ma code' lotta fags tried thou' lotta great invades buh I'm the greatest' so so so so so I rip them off like' I'm crashing' weed' verbal sense they skull' is full of smoke'
    F*ck all this clawns claiming to be king of rap' ya nikkah been of the verbal wings' I sent you to heaven' film me with your best' b*tch' I take your fans before I take your life' I walk on coal
    Valice massive goal
    F*ch It I'm rewriting history ma bars been misclined on the walls of Egypt
    Now you can take your crap n' leave
     
  3. Alliance said:

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    This is grown man bidnez, I can give u death
    While I take liberty; fresh to death
    The words submerge in the splurge of orders
    In this one world it's all under heaven..
    I'm sippin' da rem; hennesssy n holy-waterr..
    breathin' deep let the words inhale evidencez
    It's evident the line is divine heaven sent
    I've proof 100%..poof..set the booth on fiya..again!!!
    All I do, what I do is for the win-win!!
    I'm still winning again..(ah!)
    U catch wind of my wins
    Smilin' how u see I'm breakin' da innz
    Alliance been pushin' da pen to no endz
    Grindin' da ink to da Benj like lines to ur nose stench..(uhhh!)
    I've been known to own lines like prison sense..
    Capture the mind and let'em spin
    Lookin' like a loopin' fiya breathin' dragonn!!
    U wonder how it all began!
    I just keep push'n it like Jay n draw inspiration
    Inhale deep like God-Son..
    To da One n only Ill-Will from God-Son..
    So who the hell is this ill will??
    Son of a punk!?
    I will leave him one..will, so he just go with da ill
    N go head n diss yaself for the kill..
    That's like u chokin' more than the real kill bill
    Lord forgive me still, for the verbs that's sharp to impose will..(oww)
    I expose skill flip the composition..
    N watch how they decompose..stale..
    This spit like bone thugs n harmony
    When I mo muder the rap sheet!!(ugh)
    I don't wanna harm thee..
    but I'm armed up down to the knee..
    da 380 will tickle ur feet!
    Im a fiend of the earn! When word is bond..
    N werd is born!! n I'm spell bounded to drown u nerds by the pound..
    When them birds speak it's un-renounce
    When I'm all geek squad, got the plug to da sound..
    I'm from that nasty era of krazy 80's..like krazyy 88 generation!
    Spit'n phlegm on the street from the block
    To the old corners of ya girl city!!
    N if ya zeus u gonna need more pity..
    This flow of zoo that gets ya lyrics all stampede!!
    U don't wanna Tri-Gun..Im like Vash..the Stampede..
    Like brotha from a different mother..
    Hate to understand when we get misunderstood..
    I don't want to destroy ya for the sake of the brothahood
    But my egos will blow ya ethos any day under da hood!!(toastyyy)
    N believe u me when all is good
    U aint gotta be a wanna be thug..
    U be in the club huggin ya wansta thug!
    Fuxx it let this be ur suicide slug
    Since ur such a train wreck to the session
    Im not one to fuxxin' reckon with..
    I burn script n let this piece be the lesson kid!
    Ya burn quick..like a NJ train wreck (rip)
    I dilate the pupils so u blind to lights!
    I can give u night vision still u can't break lights!
    This like fighting against ur own mirror..
    U can't stand ur own sight..
    N young'n I've been known to owns mics..
    U may test ur might!!
    But u might get bite like a holyfiled night!
    This rhyme is hype..like a Tyson fight!!
    Fuxx what u bring..I break jaws like a Tyson right!!(lol)
    Fucc all ya wrongness if u can't do it right..
    Ask ur bytch she'll tell u Alliance do it nice!
    The bimbos shakin' azz the way I'm throwing dicez
    Im hot on this track..I haven't even taken a hike..
    U can take the hype and suffocate urself until feel the high!!(ok)
    Bytch ya still wet in the panties..
    I go hard like a morning wood when the sun rise..
    I might not raise the dead..
    but the lines can resurrect the vets..
    to burn ya like Biggie n Pac..
    Ur all nerds tube that dance to ur tube box!
    I'm on that rock that shoot out..
    N party the whole block..
    I ain't a house hold name
    but still the house is under my name dawg!!(lol)
    What have u earn..Son???
    I got a pad for my fam n the fams thats on lock!
    Talk the walk..n walk what u can't drop
    I was birth from a seed to this planet rock..
    I've been runnin' dmc with the Bambaataa plant rock!!!(sonic booom!!)
    Fuse with the soul of hip hop..I'm hippy-dy to this ill drop..
    I'm so hot like pharrell drop..
    The thrilla in manila like when Biggie pop!!
    Im all sage from the age of Pac n hip hop
    Like Nas history in the making, I'm marking my own spot!!
    This life of mine like the "Get Down"!!
    I just connect the dot n take off like a fuselage..I refuse to stop!!
    Cuz this amusing when ur veiws from the top!!(ugh!)
     
  4. dakinng said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Alliance View Post
    This is grown man bidnez, I can give u death
    While I take liberty; fresh to death
    The words submerge in the splurge of orders
    In this one world it's all under heaven..
    I'm sippin' da rem; hennesssy n holy-waterr..
    breathin' deep let the words inhale evidencez
    It's evident the line is divine heaven sent
    I've proof 100%..poof..set the booth on fiya..again!!!
    All I do, what I do is for the win-win!!
    I'm still winning again..(ah!)
    U catch wind of my wins
    Smilin' how u see I'm breakin' da innz
    Alliance been pushin' da pen to no endz
    Grindin' da ink to da Benj like lines to ur nose stench..(uhhh!)
    I've been known to own lines like prison sense..
    Capture the mind and let'em spin
    Lookin' like a loopin' fiya breathin' dragonn!!
    U wonder how it all began!
    I just keep push'n it like Jay n draw inspiration
    Inhale deep like God-Son..
    To da One n only Ill-Will from God-Son..
    So who the hell is this ill will??
    Son of a punk!?
    I will leave him one..will, so he just go with da ill
    N go head n diss yaself for the kill..
    That's like u chokin' more than the real kill bill
    Lord forgive me still, for the verbs that's sharp to impose will..(oww)
    I expose skill flip the composition..
    N watch how they decompose..stale..
    This spit like bone thugs n harmony
    When I mo muder the rap sheet!!(ugh)
    I don't wanna harm thee..
    but I'm armed up down to the knee..
    da 380 will tickle ur feet!
    Im a fiend of the earn! When word is bond..
    N werd is born!! n I'm spell bounded to drown u nerds by the pound..
    When them birds speak it's un-renounce
    When I'm all geek squad, got the plug to da sound..
    I'm from that nasty era of krazy 80's..like krazyy 88 generation!
    Spit'n phlegm on the street from the block
    To the old corners of ya girl city!!
    N if ya zeus u gonna need more pity..
    This flow of zoo that gets ya lyrics all stampede!!
    U don't wanna Tri-Gun..Im like Vash..the Stampede..
    Like brotha from a different mother..
    Hate to understand when we get misunderstood..
    I don't want to destroy ya for the sake of the brothahood
    But my egos will blow ya ethos any day under da hood!!(toastyyy)
    N believe u me when all is good
    U aint gotta be a wanna be thug..
    U be in the club huggin ya wansta thug!
    Fuxx it let this be ur suicide slug
    Since ur such a train wreck to the session
    Im not one to fuxxin' reckon with..
    I burn script n let this piece be the lesson kid!
    Ya burn quick..like a NJ train wreck (rip)
    I dilate the pupils so u blind to lights!
    I can give u night vision still u can't break lights!
    This like fighting against ur own mirror..
    U can't stand ur own sight..
    N young'n I've been known to owns mics..
    U may test ur might!!
    But u might get bite like a holyfiled night!
    This rhyme is hype..like a Tyson fight!!
    Fuxx what u bring..I break jaws like a Tyson right!!(lol)
    Fucc all ya wrongness if u can't do it right..
    Ask ur bytch she'll tell u Alliance do it nice!
    The bimbos shakin' azz the way I'm throwing dicez
    Im hot on this track..I haven't even taken a hike..
    U can take the hype and suffocate urself until feel the high!!(ok)
    Bytch ya still wet in the panties..
    I go hard like a morning wood when the sun rise..
    I might not raise the dead..
    but the lines can resurrect the vets..
    to burn ya like Biggie n Pac..
    Ur all nerds tube that dance to ur tube box!
    I'm on that rock that shoot out..
    N party the whole block..
    I ain't a house hold name
    but still the house is under my name dawg!!(lol)
    What have u earn..Son???
    I got a pad for my fam n the fams thats on lock!
    Talk the walk..n walk what u can't drop
    I was birth from a seed to this planet rock..
    I've been runnin' dmc with the Bambaataa plant rock!!!(sonic booom!!)
    Fuse with the soul of hip hop..I'm hippy-dy to this ill drop..
    I'm so hot like pharrell drop..
    The thrilla in manila like when Biggie pop!!
    Im all sage from the age of Pac n hip hop
    Like Nas history in the making, I'm marking my own spot!!
    This life of mine like the "Get Down"!!
    I just connect the dot n take off like a fuselage..I refuse to stop!!
    Cuz this amusing when ur veiws from the top!!(ugh!)


    okay okay
    well you tryna rap
    but all i seein is crap
    because all you do is wack
    oops broke through
    did you see the crack?
    if you run as good as you rap
    you cant even make track
    nice job tryna come with the comeback
    but with all the bullets you see me pack
    but my money stacked to the roof
    stacked like a rack
    my god all you see is stack
    but like a god im the return of the mack
    dakinng is here
    so dont try and come back
     
  5. Dreadedbeast56 said:

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    Scince im new here ima lay it down i came up in here to mess around dont know if theres someone who owns a crown, all i like to do is make sound and use this gift to spread some joy around but this is soundin a bit gay what ive written down so ima stop before i begin to drown
     
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    Young Akol zeus said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dreadedbeast56 View Post
    Scince im new here ima lay it down i came up in here to mess around dont know if theres someone who owns a crown, all i like to do is make sound and use this gift to spread some joy around but this is soundin a bit gay what ive written down so ima stop before i begin to drown
    I ain't tryna spit quick, i just wanna kill you sick. Rap is just a battle, and you a rattle turtle. Im Sick and tired of this bullshit, your mind thinking speed without no limit. *Im overcharging, im supercharged *in tha studio i overrap. Im done with you, you ****en fool my life is just a tool that will never rust, im bruised and your shoe is like a broom, *take away my stress, with my music coz im tha best of the best' I got no crowd I was born with it'
    I wont be angry at all, im like the rain when it falls its either you walk carefully or be ready to crawl.
    im sober on premethezine,
    the illness in your medicine,
    you depend on me im like the boat that you're paddling in
    I fall on one knee just to feed off my enemies, f*ck it lemmi excuse ma inner core coz u already having doubts of joining this forum' guess that's ur welcoming madafaca.
     
  7. Dreadedbeast56 said:

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    Listen im a panda like designer a lyrical genuis and refiner all i have to do is sit back in my recliner while you stoke the flames of the burning fire my lit tracks be on that, im gonna try and make a name for myself i never said anything bout relying on you, whered ya get into that, ill get into the fact that my syntax isnt intact im like a kid with a.d.h.d or a.d.d bouncin all over the walls hey thats me but sometimes you have to take risks to cause some impact bet you didnt think of that you say your like the rain but you aint nothin at all id be ironic if you were the one to fall, just like you fall to your knees not to feed off your enemies, but cause theyre the ones who are the rain that falls so actually you should be ready to crawl, and im confused why do you call me a rattle turtle when your a horse thats as fat as a cattle tryna jump over a hurdle hoping to escape this battle it makes no sense,when you claim to be the best of the best than why do you choose to go after the one whos new and lower than the rest maybe its because your high on that premethazine you be on that makes you think you can stop me and get the best of and underestimate me and my ability to attack back this is the first time I need a gun to strike back it goes ratatatatatat shootin down your rowboat and its getting a little bit late so ill let you know that I have alot more in store,that name i said im making for myself is dreadedbeast the king of em all and to me your just a door mat.

    Real talk this forum is awesome all of you are crazy im glad to be here but dont know if i can compete sorry didnt know how to reply to your exact thread so i just went
    Last edited by Dreadedbeast56; 10-14-2016 at 09:11 PM.
     
  8. _SBU said:

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    Welcome to the forum, make yourself comfortable.
    Mithras "syntax" kid that's.. cut the bull'.

    Yeah I said 'welcome', but I ain't a "door mat".
    You need a door mat to hide where your flaws at.

    DreadedBeast fifty six..?
    I got 55 severed heads on my wall but I'll still fit him in.

    Your best score's like mech wars in text form:
    Dread: nought.

    You said you're a panda. that's not a dreaded beast.
    Yo, who you dreaded by? lettuce leaves?
    Please.
    Dreaded Beast? Sheesh, seems like a tame pet to me.
    pest at least, they ain't the same pedigree.
    Let it be.

    DreadedBeast.. beheaded priests then headed east,
    But let's agree.. next to me his threats are weak.
    Extra weak. take a deadline extension.
    Extra weak but lengthen the sentence.

    If you's a dreadedbeast
    It's human centipede.

    You mentioned what Zeus did; how he picked on the new kid.
    If he leaves the new-dissed it's exposure for you d*cks.

    You called Akol a horse coz he called you rattle turtle?
    Damn fam, that was hurtful.
    He ain't a horse, he's a pony with bells and his saddle's purple.
    Uh.. rattle turtle?
    What kinda random verbal..
    Oh.. wait it's hard.. his greatest bar..
    He talkin 'bout how these shells gon make him dance.
    Or something.

    You shot down Jojo's "rowboat"?
    Oh no!
    You fought for shore.
    We're all in oar.
    You lack the wit, got "more in store"?
    I'm a battleship and my moorings tore.
     
  9. DoubleDipMyTip said:

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    My rhymes are similar to grapes aging into fine wine, they're only getting stronger as they pass the tests of time,
    Patience is a guide that leaves even the best refined,
    Lifes about tryna find your peace of mind, with love and hate intertwined, as Atoms vibrate and Stars shine,
    Record labels beggin me to sign,
    I combine a flow sweet like cake with lyrics deep like space to design a style that'll realign Hip Hop's spine before it breaks, it can't carry the weight of all these snakes,
    Nice try Drake, but even Hellen Keller who lets remind, is deaf and blind, knows your wack *** lyrics aint lethal, they benign,
    My tracks are a sequel to the prime, Golden Era of time,
    I'm leaving fake *** rappers behind, with every rhyme,
    line after line,
    MC's need to ketchup like heinz,
    Last edited by DoubleDipMyTip; 10-18-2016 at 07:09 PM.
     
  10. Dreadedbeast56 said:

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    Is this how i reply back sry i still dont understand everything
     
  11. Ill Will said:

    Default Dissing every member of"AllTheLyrics" Part One

    All u rappers have no skill
    except for Ill Will
    making all this money
    with them hunned dolla billz
    i'm only here for the thrill
    hustle then i steal
    you rappers aint real
    talkin all that shpeel
    I'll put you all in seal
    make you all conceal
    you know who the truth is
    if ya don't thats why i'm here
    I'll make all you rappers
    make it clear
    and disappear
    i think i smell something and
    i think that is fear
    cause ya know what
    Ill Will's the king in here
    talking all that nonsense
    but lacking lots of commonsense
    with confidence so clear
    ya rappers are now the past tense
    They call me fortune teller
    cause i'm full of great expense
    full of great effects
    with the the most common type of great defense
    no offense
    but the depth
    of ur breath
    has nothing but regret
    cause every time you breath
    global warming gets intense
     
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    Cliche said:

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    The flow was just dreadful... Sorry kid you tried
     
  13. Ill Will said:

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    For your information that flow was an old school flow as if you would know anything about that anyway.
     
  14. SHAYMEX said:

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    I'll rap!! But someone make me mad first!!
     
  15. Alliance said:

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    No for real?
    U thought that shiet was ill
    Nah for real?
    U must be off ur pills
    Up high rolling on purple hill
    Spewing shiet runing round ur field
    What's the deal with ya spill
    For real ill?
    This the best u can deal?
    Must be ill will..
    How u keep reinventing the wheels
    Meals on wheels
    Im hungry for the kill
    Ya skill lack that mass appeal
    Ur a square that circle round a ferris wheel
    still u get peel like hot skillet meal
    Im for real u need more thrill
    Oh for real u just need more skills
    Block head u don't know the drill
    Old school?? Ur too late ill..
    Won't get saved by the bell!
    I know the deal!
    U need to upping up on ur pills
    If ur skill is old school??
    U need bigger head new bills
    Still stuck on grades school
    U need to pay ya student loan bills
    Huh!! Funny I'll throw in a mix..
    I don't need use any kind of tricks
    Yo shaymex u aint a mad rapper
    When they talk of gats..
    U pull a tea cup out ya hat like a mad-hatter
    Sad bastard..shieting out like fat bastard
    I'm full of mojo..Austin Power!
    Flow stone cold like Steve Austin with power
    Devour a coward..if u can't spit just bow down!
    Im all about that flow top of my reign in my tower!!!
     
  16. Duba 89 said:

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    Dissing every member of"AllTheLyrics" Part One-this is the hardest bar I could pick out.
    Attention seeking lil biya..h, your 1st week and you already topping the charts for the wrong reasons.
    Only this aint the forum for plastic bars nor nursery rhymes.
    Close your mouth and open your legs more that's my advice
    Talking about "making all this money' that sentence feels incomplete, ***** wac your PIMP's name?

    Ooh shxt was about to dis-member a newbie

    Welcome Will
     
  17. D-low said:

    Default Let's go

    Check It ,

    Yeah Illest newbie on the scene ,

    Messing with the realest don't try to intervene ,

    Skilled Individual with a Mind we cannot Elaborate ,

    Here let me Demonstrate ,

    I am the One Don't **** with me ,

    I don't **** with the Enemy,

    Came here to spit ,

    This flow Into your head you cannot fit ,

    To this beat I come alive ,

    some of you can only hope to survive ,

    I highly doubt you'll get outta this alive ,

    12 Sentence Narrative This would make you choke , you *****s better stay woke.

    Now you have nothing to say ,

    word to lotto. **** you , But have a nice day


    Yeah , Keep It D- Low.
     
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    Cliche said:

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    You just ****ed up kid.


    This ill will kid?
    He is ****ing trash
    He not even lowkey
    So im about to bash
    I'll ****in slash him like I was the Grim Reaper
    Didn't have have a chance to talk **** because I put him
    Six feet deeper
    Flame my flow go ahead, don't hurt yourself
    These **** riders up in here try to play themselves
    Mess around i'll chop you up like my dinner
    Boil you up, and sell you to a cannibal
    You might taste bitter
    Bout to commit rapper genocide, word to Hitler
    Yall lil kids got me ****ed up
    Yall must not have known I was a ****ing savage
    Like what's up
    Yeah I'm making it known to yall I'm ruthless
    **** around with me
    I'll leave a ***** toothless
     
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    Cliche said:

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    Tbh, I think you are actually pretty ill will (See what I did there?) But hey, this is battle rap. Don't take it personal bro.
     
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    Cliche said:

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    _SBU you got a sick flow man, I like