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    Quote Originally Posted by Anonymity View Post
    Everyone currently is absolutely not worthy
    Hurried flawed scheme y'all are submitting
    leaves me wondering if any of you can read your own typing

    Daking oh duck King, King of sucking at rapping
    Your replies are quacks, and you act all cocky
    Real one called himself all-beef, but you're the chicken patty

    Duh King everytime you read a reply from me
    It'll have you ducking at your computer screen
    You'll notice I replied with fire to your "ice"
    and your first thought will be "dam he frosty"

    Been watching for a match but the vision became clearer
    I'm beginning to think competition
    is me vs the mirror
    This is my post one and even those who've posted some
    Are still inferior to the point I've gotta battle everyone

    Real one your rhymes are filler
    Killa who can't pronounce "er"
    Vowels in words where they werent before
    I'm betta at bein good, and I'm more consistent...er
    My words are fire, yours are aighters
    I barely tried, you need to try harder
    I'll let it slide once but next time is slaughter

    Thought he was smart but I logged on
    Real one is artificial, Armstrong
    Feel my omnipotent pencil, Mars to the Sun
    Real one can catch my lyrics like an atomic bomb
    Real one is so off topic his raps are about being random
    He's half a man, his hymen is intact
    Attached to a tight vagina cuz real one
    Gets fukd in the as$

    Last stanza before I audition with my battle script
    Past legends set the standard and y'all let it slip
    Rendered all pathetic with no battle art to submit
    Filled couplets basically filled with filler and the diss then becomes irrelevant.. Only filler
    Not worthy?? Look at this twink all cockthirsty
    On the vets' D hoping they'll give him the girthy
    Sure, long days and late nights will put some hair on your chest
    but it takes more than a callous on the side of a finger to be the best
    Shiiit, lazy-minded individuals get devoured in this arena
    Where I'll put crews down like shots at a cantina
    Like Jay Electronica said, "I dont feel ya"
    Learn to be wary of envious men antes de que se te echen encima
    I'm the stuff of nightmares to your favorite rapper's ghostwriter
    You got highchair raps with the lung capacity of a coal miner
    You think you're so dope but my flow's tighter
    You can't rap with me and you sure as hell ain't no writer!
    Knock your block off while you spout your bullshit from atop a glass soap-box
    You should be pummeled with rocks, I give absolutely no fuccs
    To be frank with you, you're not even that good
    I don't believe you can formulate a proper response but you should
    put me in my place, show everyone how great you can be...
    Pffft! I'm doper than you to the muthafuccin umpteenth degree!
    Straight up you look like a warm meal to me
    Get ate up and leave a starving artist at peace
    I pray B.I.G's ghost leaves Lil Yachty deceased
    I don't do catch-and-release you have awoken a beast!

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    Yo, I'm back in the session!
    Rapper alike, mc, textcee getting slam with the new edition
    New chapter, happy new year 2017!!
    New pages to the content more flows to ya conscious
    Alliance back to back, back at it again!
    with so much back..break beat get ya dizzy..backspin
    No pen just pushing the keys-kilos so cold it's snow in
    Win-win situation fucc ya freestyle my free written..
    Blaze ya free session, decipher the hyper cypher rendition
    Ya mice to men, boys too men Im all hype all flight like a kite to the wind
    Been long since..after the break Im back in breaking that all innz
    Printing them paper no dry inks just digitalize the money wise spent
    Mcz pick up the slack ya lacking common sense
    Allince got lines u can't define the fine print
    Divine spit..load up the lama and watch it spit out fiya
    Wave ya lighter in the air n raise ya blunt higher
    I ignite flame that burn sun spot in ya membrane
    Intense game playing to win, yesh I am!!
    Ya sos to ya son of sam sol..
    I'll burn ya url and if u don't believe me..
    U can burn in hell..so for real..it's soul so real
    No really so surreal..im the fuccin real deal..
    Ya bytch know I kill her..wrap sheet..
    Show me a pu$$y I put it to sleep..
    Creep with ya deeds I put u 6 feet deep in ya grave
    The lines between u and me is 6 feet above the space..
    Im so lit the drug is so lace
    Spit the spit get ya mind all cage..
    Ya spit rage? ya shiet fake I'll raid ya spit
    Don't hate the haters just hate what the game is..
    Display skillz so scientific futuristic flow fitted to the brim
    My style grim reaper u seeing death before u go up against Alliance!! (Nukka!!)

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    Now I'm stronger and better, wiser and older,
    Nowadays i feel like i'm somehow nicer yet colder,
    It's hard for people to gain my trust or respect,
    I'm vicious with words, quick to impress with my dialect,
    That's mainly a wall that can't crumble, a natural defence,
    In life there's many who wear masks, it's all a pretence.
    I got friends by the bucketload, literally in the hundreds,
    But they're friends with the facade, inside there's a monster,
    Only time i've ever let go i've seen the damage that that **** can do,
    So I scribble in a pad, it's all I've got to express the views,
    Society as a whole wouldn't get, fathom or grasp,
    Probably make up some mental condition, say my heads in the stars,
    I guess this ain't really a battle response, it was just a trigger,
    So i put the glock back in my mouth, pull back the trigger.

    Blood splattered, brains scattered, all over the wall,
    '18 year old medic found dead in the bathroom stall'
    They'd discuss it, conclude I was selfish,
    Nothing happened in his past, thats how they'd sell this,
    Maybe put a spin on it, stretch for a mental illness,
    Or say that the workload was too much and that's what killed him.
    It's sobering to think, in a few short years i've gone from the brink,
    To being a stable citizen, just through mind power and discipline,
    And realising dwelling on things that can't change, is actually whats imprisoning

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    Look at my life, this is what I do
    You was taking flights but you ainít ever flew
    I put it all on the line, Iím standing on the money
    Life is my *****, you will never take her from me
    Look at my life, this is what I do
    You was taking flights but you ainít ever flew
    I put it all on the line, Iím standing on the money
    Life is my *****, you will never take her from me
    Stuck in a room, eyes real low, staring at the engineer Ďcause time froze
    Blurry vision, Iím only seeing what God chose
    So I let my heart breathe and I sigh slow
    At any minute, I could lose my vibe
    A couple of single *****es drunk from the high
    A couple lies, couple flows and them hard bars
    A screw face is all of you damn Pop-Tarts
    I just wanna make this music, **** you and your pop charts
    Iím a blessing to this art, the message I retort
    Nothing is impossible but imposters can measure you
    Tell it youíll never make it, death is only awaiting
    The dreams of a man, life full of richness, wealth in the soul
    Believe it or get rid of it, Iím only trying to find out where Iím headed
    And if Heaven never calls, Iím still rocking God on my letterman

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    Post Rap

    I'm a savage, but you are a cabbage
    I lay down the beat, but you smell like feet

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    Ima cut this quick that **** is sick if you practice more you could speak it and floor it.. spit faster then Eddy Murphy the oilmen so stay awhile you might learn a thing or two

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    I get high, get blown in the zone
    So gone can't find the key to my home
    Still ownin' the flows all greenery full grown
    Im on..another one, smoke out the bong
    Long hit keep it going get stone like jesus
    knockout on the bedrock rock'n hard
    Keep them rocks out, ice out freezing
    Lights out but the cherry keep burning..
    Earning my stash high..cash dive
    Scrooge Mcduck how I keep them coins tuck
    Living the life to the fullest cuz only death is guarantee
    Buffing on my dubbie like it's a bear necessities
    Living life fully any mean necessary
    Quantum theory I keep my blunt lit
    Feel the force n let Princess Leia live..
    Im gas out just running on fumes
    My life too positive I don't let the negativity consume me..
    Slappin' bones bytch just pay me..
    Set them bags got enough..
    To go all around the world just spade me!
    He who shade or hate the way I free
    Man fucc ya free got u screaming out...
    Like Free just put the beat on plz!!

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    21 year old rapper from Sydney Australia was recently in a bad accident i got hit by a car in thailand , broke my leg and had a bleed on my brain causing post traumatic amnesia, so i lost the ability to make new memories for a few months, anyway if i hit 10k subscribers ill film and post my first freestyle since my memory came back
    https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCRc...HiL-5CNpyZokFw

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    21 year old rapper from Sydney Australia was recently in a bad accident i got hit by a car in thailand , broke my leg and had a bleed on my brain causing post traumatic amnesia, so i lost the ability to make new memories for a few months, anyway if i hit 10k subscribers ill film and post my first freestyle since my memory came back
    https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCRc...HiL-5CNpyZokFw

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    Quote Originally Posted by Moctezuma View Post
    Not worthy?? Look at this twink all cockthirsty
    On the vets' D hoping they'll give him the girthy
    Sure, long days and late nights will put some hair on your chest
    but it takes more than a callous on the side of a finger to be the best
    Shiiit, lazy-minded individuals get devoured in this arena
    Where I'll put crews down like shots at a cantina
    Like Jay Electronica said, "I dont feel ya"
    Learn to be wary of envious men antes de que se te echen encima
    I'm the stuff of nightmares to your favorite rapper's ghostwriter
    You got highchair raps with the lung capacity of a coal miner
    You think you're so dope but my flow's tighter
    You can't rap with me and you sure as hell ain't no writer!
    Knock your block off while you spout your bullshit from atop a glass soap-box
    You should be pummeled with rocks, I give absolutely no fuccs
    To be frank with you, you're not even that good
    I don't believe you can formulate a proper response but you should
    put me in my place, show everyone how great you can be...
    Pffft! I'm doper than you to the muthafuccin umpteenth degree!
    Straight up you look like a warm meal to me
    Get ate up and leave a starving artist at peace
    I pray B.I.G's ghost leaves Lil Yachty deceased
    I don't do catch-and-release you have awoken a beast!

    Moc your ovaries have to be inside out,
    you called me cokthirsty....
    But your rhymes sound dried out
    Called me cockthirsty, how in the world
    Your rhymes are begging for mercy, you are a dead girl

    Coal miner lungs? You shoulda been clotheslined and hung
    My internal temperature is upteenth and somn'
    A gajillion decrees hotter than sun
    Your a million exponents from where I begun

    moc was thirsty for attention, he is atleast okayish
    Heres an explanation as to why he wrote basic
    he writes "special" edition for people like him
    His style is retarded, so words are easier to comprehend

    Mortal combat with handicaps, and acrobats
    Hemispheres clash to produce a synapse of finesse you ain't witnessed since Mars collapsed
    Born split in half, I formed when my twin passed
    Abnormal gift with gab, took a week now I'm passing rap as a gift I've always had
    I'm flexible with verbal tact, incontestable with vocab
    You will not find a better format
    But realize you can only be my doormat

    moc is a real fag
    This thirsty coksucker would suck Sasquatchs red rocket shuttle for a skittles bag
    Tasted the rainbow and Moc would swallow gag

    He called me cockthirsty... Won't be forgetting that
    He's a Dik hungry foreskin suckin' turkey, who gobbles big nads
    Endangered species of poultry, he's the last

    I bird hunt pterosaurs, wasting ammo on buzzards is for others
    You're a canary bird
    and this isn't glory this is me kinda bored
    You've been smothered since the second stanza I'm sure

    Moc bleeds more than most girls
    His scheme rhymes aight...but lacks firm force
    He is like a blistered sore,
    eventually a callous will form
    I'm quirky, I wear what the vets wore
    Evil stares and stopped throats
    Beware the lost folk, anonymity is an inside joke
    Corny yes, but the devil knows where the children of the corn grow

    Moc turned into a beast?
    He's a mockingbird missing wings,
    'Flow tight' like he can't breathe, he's gonna suffocate on my minor/miner scheme
    If he thought he had a chance at victory
    He must be delusional, false memory

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    Default f off

    when you steal lyrics cause your too lame lol

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    Who would that be

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    Lately, lyrically incline'n combining..
    The very essence of timing..
    The fundamental truth in rhyme'n
    I live in this space between the line-in
    Any given dime earn since, I chime in
    Climb the chart stake my mark..
    Walk the bark..parked at the lot
    The hunnies..playboy bunnies
    Know how I talk their hearts
    I wear emotion on my sleeves
    The way they feel my spark..
    Started with alil adequacy
    To holding hands in the park
    Snuggle up closer..
    When she's afraid of the dark
    Luv the way she strut ya parts
    We don't part ways we part legs
    I row hard in her lakes alot..
    Ate the cakes alot.she bake it up
    I melt right in the spot
    She know how to work it right from the start..
    I don't shift gears just let it sink in her thought
    She don't fight the feeling just embracing the feeling alot..
    Next summer I didn't see her again..
    But she capture a piece of my heart..
    A piece of the puzzle I piece up..
    embedded in my frame memeory slot..
    I don't go against the grain..
    Just let every grain hit on that clock!

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    Not a battle rap. But opponents are welcome

    This is a Caucasian overtaken the track
    I ain't racin' cuz that's racist if I ain't black
    Wasted words on an audience that exaggerates facts
    Turn gates off, and waste Kodak
    I ain't all about the trends now I remember the past
    Thank you Naz, Tupac, em and LL
    You are my inspiration, and I hope I've done well

    This is the details on how rap fell
    Too many plastic afri'Ken
    Dolls talkin' over instrumentals
    They consistent with the simple mental and we all thought damn compared to nothin' else on da radio
    Maybe they got potential
    Dismissal
    Frustration I feel when all my friends say they real
    I'm over here starvin' with a value meal

    It's aight though I'll make it with my rhymes and clothes
    But on a higher note, gonna talk about lil yachty
    the whiny boat, with a leak in the body
    and his featured bros, with grills so large they barely talking
    They are calling themselves freshman, students I'm embalming

    They special on a tour bus,
    yes they all wear helmets when they show up
    That bus is a short bus for autism and dumbfuks
    Them biches brainwashed to think they spit'n polish
    wipe the cum off
    and tell them nighas to come off it
    Wipe the planet and all the humans off it
    That be awesome
    Crash the ark into the Arctic, take off with the holy convent
    Rewrite history with no fukn words on it

    Let's be honest it's hard to separate the artist from the convicts
    Tragic models sponsored like they worth som' but they only addicts
    No consciousness they do it for the Rolex, thots and biches
    I do it for the thoughts of kids who feel as lost as I did
    Pessimistic moments but I strive for the opposite
    I'm positive that my confidence is enough to over take the opposition and push hip hop off the cliff
    These fake gangbangers can catch the monster under the mattress
    I'm the boogie man and the puzzy bandit
    Focus on my silly antics
    Venom from my words implanted in your spinal cord,
    This is martial form, preying mantis

    Somn and such as it is
    I fire shots for the attention and this is for the audience
    I'm continental massive with an extended vocab list
    I gotta mention I'm narcissistic but you can catch this complimentary dik

    Irrelevant, like this topic switch
    I like thick chicks with lips I can make an "O" with before the suck dik
    Netflix and chill means no television til the bich is pregnant
    And if then and if when, the paternity will always be a question

    Unstable tongue I talk in French,
    extended senses, my omnipotence is fully loaded and global explosion is in development
    Always flexin the best intelligence
    I'm a scientist crossed with a Martian,
    out of this world with my logic

    I cross words like crossed swords,
    Throw up the crossed words in possessed form

    My tonsils are sore cuz my lyrics are ill
    I will Leave your spirit torn and sore with molecular burns
    While your body burns at a land fill

    This is an exorcism and I ain't even Christian
    I'm killin the fallen angels with basic precision
    Double shot to your temple, while I shoot from the hip with my pencil
    Break bread with government officials
    Blue lives matter cuz your life depends on their manners
    Unconstitutional disaster, but you can blame our ancestors

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    Yo, I'm here to inform u, if u don't wanna listen then I'm just gonna have to warn u, ur thoughts are whack but most of all ur rhymes are 100% slack, ur a nerd, best of the geezers, man I bet u double strap ya backpack I'm makin u scared huh, u sweaty. Cuz after this one u better be ready. Look. U the type of ni*** to bring a knife to the gun fight. We shootings the rhymes but there ain't nothin like mine. But u in the corner just cuttin the time. But I gotta go now I'm runnin outta space. But I hope ur finally in ur place. Nvm who was I kidding.. u were never leading this race

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    I'm gonna jump in right about now, I doubt you're gonna listen but I swear I'll make you bow. Imma lay it down, and this is how it goes. Now that I'm here we can start this show. This truly was a bore but I wasn't expecting more, all y'all are weak. You can't kill my three year streak. I'm no eminem but I can promise you. You'll run and hide before I'm even through. I know I'm not the best and you can say what you'd like, because I've heard it all before but I won't stay on the floor. You can try to knock me down but I won't stay on the ground. I'm taking the spotlight, they're cheering for me, you can lay down the mic, because I can't be beat.

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    My lyrical combat, will leave you deceased and in piece on tracks
    I bring the heat on wax, to split through your hard hats
    When I deliver rhymes, I rock you from your liver to your spine
    When I spit I gotcha giving up the mic, unable to give another line
    My techniques have been critiqued, been given five stars
    I’m living like a star with over nine cars, I’m never behind bars
    To go against me you’re gonna need a permanent type of insurance
    That’s unheard of, come try to rap on my tracks and get murdered
    So many things in my life, I’ve been trying to shake
    Either night or day, my rhymes are the only thing that makes me try 2 stay awake
    I got enough issues, to blow tears on about 1,000 tissues
    If you come against me, you better bring your flowers with you
    I’ll murder you without a pistol, words off the top of the dome
    Acts as my chrome, no need for gats I get relaxed in the zone
    When I’m in the moment, I spit lyrical components
    Unfit for anyone unfocused who hasn’t slept on it
    And no one is potent enough to try and test the pedigree
    Going against my techniques is like going against my weaponry
    Do u really wanna TEST ME!?

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    The rhymes get dissect,
    Y'all lines water down..diluted..bad mix!
    My dialogue speak intellect
    Just let me flex this text
    I got this around the wrist like a rolex
    Chest puff'n up the smoke
    My style bowflex that get cut up in dope
    Peak the scope thru the eye hole
    Put that together..whole!
    N get bullseyes thru this snipper barrel
    Hit ya like a 1000 arrows
    Bring chills down ya spine like an eskimo
    Inhale deep a snipper breath..
    One shot..one death!
    If I can give u one mic..like it's one life
    Like it's one night to live!
    One flick of the light!
    Spread L like an MC gift
    Toss up the spliff
    I was born ready to die!
    Y'all welcome to try!
    Bring on the fight..
    I bring fiya like a Heath-cliff!!!(ughh!!)
    Hit the switch make that clip..click
    Bang! Bang! Make ya brain tick..
    I got this itch to pull the trigger..
    Nikka seeing reaper like a long slumber
    Ya pu$$y-azz cold since last December!
    I don't fucc with short papers just long numbers
    Ya rap pissing poor in the pot..shallow imagination
    Im deep in that bytch like a long vacation
    Style embrace me it's hip hop infatuation
    Most of y'all are cheap imitation..crab-meats
    Ya raps weak..gats don't kock right..
    They just kock tweak!!
    Y'all aint rap god just rap fraud
    Go to China...they wrap dawgs!!(ha!)
    I pack this strap with sugar it's pack smart!(lol)
    My rap too arrogant it's rap smart!
    Ya sweet-tooth so dangerous ya pop-tarts!!
    When I pop hard it heat up the burner
    The toaster will make u ghostier
    Get ya closer to ya real God!
    Lord forget me not!
    Im still dwelling in this world to rot!! (Oww)
    Lord forge my mind with the purest thoughts!
    Poet with the lost art..with more arch to ya last ark!
    Ancient tongue the flow ages as the sun!
    There's nothing new under the sun!
    Alliance breathe new life back into this game..
    Shut this shiet down n show y'all suckers how it's done!!(Nukka!)

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    Excuse me I don't recall claiming to be a god, but who are you to scream out fraud?
    I'll leave you speechless, I don't need you to applaud.
    You call this a game, but it ain't no joke,
    You'll be talking when you start to choke,
    You won't be able to spit what you call "fire"
    And say what you want but I'm no liar,
    I mean what I say, you'll have no words,
    No rhymes to say you'll forget to use your vocal cords.
    You mistake me for someone I'm not
    You think I'm someone who will just give up?
    I don't go down without a fight.
    But I'll make sure you're screaming in fright.
    I haven't even started, I'm just warming up.
    I'll show all of you just what I'm made of.
    Yeah you're gonna wish that you never even tried,
    Because by the time I'm through, your brain will be fried.
    And I know your punchline to come back at that one,
    "Yeah it'll be fried because you're so dumb"
    Something along those lines, right?
    You all are the same,
    You're rhymes are a bore and so first grade.
    You just can't handle my talent,
    You're way below my level,
    I can get better competition from a itty bitty pebble.
    But I'll have to settle,
    You really aren't successful.
    Don't feel bad there's several,
    But I won't be gentle.
    I'm no god I won't show mercy,
    Bow down you really aren't worthy
    Take your time, to think of a rhyme, no need to hurry.
    Just take some time with the mic and balance out your rhymes,
    Then come back at me when you can put up a challenge.

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    i wanna battle

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