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  1. #1901
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    I tried to help you but you seem allergic to winning
    Your rhymes were so bad I concluded that you needed helping
    We out here dissing peoples rapping ability
    But your gay *** too concerned with peoples sexuality
    Are you above 12 you make me question your mentality
    My flow is like a tsunami that's just how it's meant to be
    Like Bartimaeus sometimes the blind need a little water to see
    I have to break this down so fools like you can undestand
    Imagine we are different characters in a game
    Don't try to comeback because you have already lost
    You are the villain in the first level while i'm the final boss
    Last edited by olaty; 07-05-2018 at 04:05 PM.

  2. #1902
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    Like Mr T, I pity this fool,
    You still wanna engage? Such a tool.
    Your rhymes were soft, i’mma snap this and reddit it,
    Full of errors, even when it was edited
    Readin ur raps is like readin robert munsch,
    Ur rhymes belong in a kindergarten book that kids wud read durin lunch/
    U edited ur piece of crap rap, it’s still mild
    And it still spellin mistakes , are u a man child?
    80% of ur rhymes didn’t even rhyme,
    You sound like I Am Sam during story time,
    Go back to bein a virgin
    U shud consult a sex change surgeon,
    I aint concerned wit ur gender or sex,
    But i call out f ags that prefer d ick over breast,
    Sayin ur flow’s like a tsunami wave?
    When u got no ebb or flow in ur lyrics, stop the rave,
    Ur whole wrap is chicken,
    Go change ur name to mr Charles d ick-in,
    Little Oliver, a Fa g-in a rap duel?
    Shudn’t u be askin me for more gruel?
    “ I want some more please,”
    I shud punish u like a drill sarge, “ boy At ease!”
    I was trashin ur inability to rap,
    Ur brain wasnt designed for this, go back to ur fap,
    No fool even needs to view ur crappy lines,
    Their ears wud bleed , like they listenin to amanda bynes,
    Ur lyrics are alien to the rap world, straight outta the movie “Signs”
    I shud start recording it on “bad rap vines”
    Talkin about bosses and levels, now i can confirm,
    That Ur a f uckin virgin nerd , who eats man sperm,
    Never once did i bring up gaming or consoles,
    Ur probably still in grade school, with swollen tonsils,
    Go back and cry to your mommy and get her to sue,
    Cause after my lyrics violate you,
    Old Lady gonna need to be on life support bed,
    U’ll wake up feelin like u already dead,
    Ur soft like casper the ghost,
    This has been such an easy roast,
    Ur lyrics were meant to battle like a war,
    War as in 1944,
    Battlin u is such a bore,
    Id rather be lectured by a paid hooker or a w hore,
    u came in softer than spongebob , but my lyrics rough
    U soundin like u got Krabs, ur girl must have it tough,
    Right now u about to hit bikini bottom,
    My lyrics wipe u out, like God did to Sodom,
    It’s a parent that u aint on my level,
    Such a childish rebel,
    I expect another hopeless rap attempt,
    After ur tryout’s done, go work a temp,
    Smoke up a few joints with hemp,
    Maybe u’ll write more creative words,
    Cause ur lyrics are more rotten than milk curds,
    Fake azz rapper, go be a designer
    Rap is too violent for u, i will kill this shyt rhymer,
    This clear first timer.
    U don’t belong here, outcast.
    Ur a nerd who plays Outlast
    Go back to eating junk and lookin like peter griffin,
    Go back to the coke, glue, or whatever ur sniffin
    Go retire and be a food tester,
    Go change ur name to somethin like Chestor the Molester
    F uckin wit the Don, u must want a death wish filed,
    Al cap-one in you, mafia styled,

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