'rainbow'

(verse 1)

When you smile at me
all the clouds erase
You are the one I need and that won't change
You give me all the reasons to be happy
In your arms girl is where I want to be.

Forever with you is not long enough
Wonna be close to you
coz you're my other half
My heart beats,and beats just for her
I'd go crazy if we weren't together.

<HOOK>

I like that beauty mark on your face
I reminisce of when we kissed in falling snow-flakes.

{CHORUS}

I don't care if the sky is falling
Stormy winds and the thunders roaring
Even in rain I'll be around
To keep you safe like a rainbow.

You run in my mind like a cute melody
Always on me, you're my remedy
I'm having a love-struck coz of you
My one and only,number one girl.

(verse 2)

Romeo and Juliet,aye we can be
Deep into your heart please let me in
You are a big,big part of my life
I keep thinking of you everytime.

<BRIDGE>

With the stars collide and the world ends
I'll be with you like a bestfriend
pluck your wings,so you don't get to fly away
And make a wish that you stay.

(c) 2013 WILSON G.KINYUA.

Wilson,my pal,I like what you've written(the vibe,what it try's to convey)but where are the rhymes?With a little change here and there,this could be a real hit.(IMO)
Example:when you smile at me
All the clouds erase
You are the one I need
And don't have to chase

See?I think with a tweak here and there...........Hit City!

Thanks buddie!?, I'll do the changes ASAP!!

Yep, Wilson, Doug's got a point. But that's of course if you aim at writing a hit,lol Nice thought that the rainbow is you and you'll protect her even if
the skies come tumbling down. I'd say: the North Koreans would hire you and you'd be rich straight away
(it's a joke,folks, don't misunderstand me pleeze!)

Haha,i bet the Us and the n.korean's wil make peace soon coz I wouldn't like a nasty situation just like Nagasaki n hiroshima..

Hey,maybe bowl haircuts will be the new rage!

Don't the N.Koreans have an army consisting of "skinheads",lol?

Originally Posted by amaryn

Don't the N.Koreans have an army consisting of "skinheads",lol?

They have an army of Moe Howard haircuts.(Moe of the 3 Stooges,for those who need the info on the joke)