Grain Of Sand

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  1. Johnb31's Avatar

    Johnb31 said: 04-23-2013 09:52 PM

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    Life is like a grain of sand
    We flow so far in the wind
    Landing so softly to the ground
    Covering the world mound by mound
    Never ending never ceasing
    We are the trouble that keeps increasing
    We flow through the air so fast
    That we fall into the vast
    Void of this world that we inhabit
    How will we ever escape this habit
    Last edited by Johnb31; 04-24-2013 at 02:06 PM.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     

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    amaryn said: 04-26-2013 09:45 AM

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    short, and straight to the "heart of the theme"; a fact frightening and worrisome enough-
    on the other hand: who would like to live forever?

    I liked this one a lot,John!
     

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    Johnb31 said: 04-26-2013 03:31 PM

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    This one just sort of came to me I just started writing it out no where.
    There is not enough space or time to truly let the song unwind
     

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    Frankie Jasmine said: 04-26-2013 04:05 PM

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    Yes, Johnb31--very good. I can believe that it just "came" to you. Don't you love when that happens? Somehow there is a naturalness to it, including the tempo (metre) that is excellent. I loved it start to finish.