#9 (About a Girl)

(This is called #9 or "Arbitrary Song Title About a Girl I Know")

Deep it goes, here again and end to end
Welcome to our brush with life
What have you found here once
Quick to rise, have you felt it since
Tell me what I can bring about
A moment's chance, a dream of fate
Taken back by the thoughts I relate
What's it like to be the Ocean Blue
Currents opaque, can't help but to drown in you
To be caught in all your depths
Just enough to find my death

Hold me down, Hold me down
I Know your grace is good
Take a breath of fading life, you know I think you should
Hold me down, Hold me down
I Know your grace is good
Take a breath of fading life, you know I think you should

Claim sincerity and hide your innocence
The city-scapes and inner blues
The darkest of all the teenage cues
Uncertainty; deep, infinite, immense is love
Tell me we can't cross through
Only a twisted strain of youth
A blooming mystery with ignorance infused
Once said "I'll let you take the pain"
Always stumble through the church's wooden pews
Always worth the broken interlude

Hold me down, Hold me down
I Know your grace is good
Take a breath of fading life, you know I think you should
Hold me down, Hold me down
I Know your grace is good
Take a breath of fading life, you know I think you should

And as of now, you don't hold too proud
Always in sight of what you want to need
And what you need you never knew
We can always be a broken thing
It's love that crumbles what you know
Beauty lives in us, to immerse it in the world
Just accept defeat with me
Burnish all your travesties
Afterthoughts and the winds of you
Now I am away, I pray flame to last the day
Always I am a saint knelt on your porch
Scorned through one unlasting tour

Hold me down, Hold me down
I Know your grace is good
Take a breath of fading life, you know I think you should
Hold me down, Hold me down
I Know your grace is good
Take a breath of fading life, you know I think you should

I like especially the line "take a breath of fading life, you know I think you should":
otherwise this song asks for many readings, as thoughts are plenty !
Thanks for the challenge.

I wonder if you got #9 from John Lennon. He was obsessed with that number.

Nah, just the 9th song I've written haha.